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Writch

I have a new haircut.... does that count?

Writch

Wait. Here's one circa 2000. Old, like me, and mine - also like me.

The spirits are sipped but our spirits are sapped.
Our drinks dull our senses but whittle our wit.
We talk foolish and act a fool. We fool ourselves
into a backbone and a hardened heart.
At last, we can return to that haunted house
and together face the ghosts.

kuttiecc

no a haircut doesn't count.

got anything else to mount.

ivandh

Rhymes are fine, but try for meter

You will find no higher feature.

MINTAKASTAR

i do not know how

you are able to grow

such a rhymes like yours.

billgill0

SAYING  GOODBYE.

 

 

R.I.P

 

 

Go my loved ones out to play,

Enjoy the sun, enjoy the day,

My journeys end is now in sight

As I must go unto the night.

 

Remember then to stay the tear,

Of happy times that had no fear,

Years that pass you have forgot,

Be rest assured for I have not.

 

Where was I when you needed me?

Those early years my eyes can’t see,

No tender kiss, or loving arm,

Protecting you from any harm.

 

Would sorry heal your hidden cries;

Could words dry teardrops from your eyes?

If only clocks could turn back time,

I’d envelope your lives with mine.

 

Afraid of questions you might ask

My answers are prepared and masked,

Though not expected to forgive,

The time has come to live, and let live.

 

 

But as I pass into the night

My eyes will always see

Your faces smiling wide and bright

And looking up at me.

 

Bill Currie.

 

 

MINTAKASTAR

this last one is Wonderful!! Billgill0!!!

fishcake

I agree, that's a beautiful poem Bill.

I do have one suggestion; i find the final stanza loses rhythm with the rest of the poem. Perhaps this is intentional? I suggest trying a regular rhythm throughout to maintain fluidity, as I found the rhythm and rhyming scheme smooth and natural right up to that last hurdle Smile

 

However it's still a great poem, and one I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing!

kuttiecc

yeah except this is simple little poems.

Writch

 

*HISS!* then warmth is gone
    the creative spark snuffed out
           by a wet blanket

Haiku by Writch © 2009

kuttiecc

LOL.. Ya'll have a wonderful day, night, etc.....

aphrodite

L Is for the light that shines your eyes to mine

O is for oneness devine

V is victory is all that we do

E is for eternally loving you.

joaoporto

i got no friend

but i got you

your name is jane

and went away

Writch

                 this life too
                    keeps drifting to the past
                       when will I learn?

joaoporto

we never learn

from the past

unless we want

the past

to teach us

Writch

                 frosted crocuses
                 this lingering Winter kills 
                 budding Spring haiku

 

                 at the nightlight 
                 my insomniac toddler 
                 wears a halo 

shadowslayer

a slow slash

a cairful bash

a fight that seems

to scream

drop a neutron bomb

(I coulden't find a good ending)

Writch

Spring morning

the only song in my empty bird cage

is laughter

billgill0

Nothing a wee and a Tic-tac can't sort out!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

a wee and a Tic-tac can't sort out!

kuttiecc

a wee and a tic-tac can't sort out huh? 

well isn't that bigger that a duh...

I like it, I like it.