The Spy Oromis

Chapter One Oromis walked along the beach. This beach was considered to be one of the best beaches in the world. The big white cliffs helped to define it beyond just understanding how that came to be. As he walked, he thought about stuff. Stuff that might be childish. Stuff that might be better thought about later. Stuff that was happening. He was seen running toward the sea from the cliffs and he thought frantically, sweating frantically as he thought. He had his one gadget but he knew that wasn’t going to be enough. A few seconds was all he had to come up with a plan. He turned and... Chapter Two Let’s start at the beginning a few days ago, shall we? It all started when he saw the judo building on fire. He was witness to a terrorist group burning all the fighting places around town so no one could fight back. Oromis hid behind a trashcan and watched in horror. The leader yells, “Let’s get this back on track men! Light the wooden boards here too!” The men did these and left the place burning down in flames. They drove away in black shiny cars like government vehicles. Oromis went around the trash can to hide but he cracked a stick and one of the men turned toward the trash can. Oromis froze and waited. The man said to the rest, “I’ll go look, you all go.” The rest of the men leave and the lone man turns toward the trash can menacingly. Oromis knows there’s no way to hide so he steps out and acts like a little kid. “Hi, I kind of got lost. Can you help me?” The man chuckles. “There must be no witnesses.” The man swings his fish hard toward Oromis’s head and Oromis dashes backward. “Hardball, are we?” The man grabs a knife he had hidden in a iPhone case and snaps it open. Oromis started to run away when he notices the knife but the man is too fast. So Oromis grabs the trash can lid and uses it as a shield to run away as the man dashes toward him. The man grunts and rips the lid out of Oromis’s hands. Oromis looks on in horror as the knife comes toward him. Chapter Three Oromis closed his eyes and waited for the inevitable. And waited. And waited. Slowly, he opened his eyes. A group of street thugs were there and the lone man was on the ground, dead. A boy in the gang that appeared to be the leader said “Well what are you waiting for? It took you this long to open your eyes.”

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Chapter Three

Oromis closed his eyes and waited for the inevitable. And waited. And waited. Slowly, he opened his eyes. A group of street thugs were there and the lone man was on the ground, dead. A boy in the gang that appeared to be the leader said “Well what are you waiting for? It took you this long to open your eyes.”

“Who the heck are-.” The leader puts his hand over Oromis’s mouth to stop him from yelling anymore. Oromis did what any person would have done. Oromis bit him. “YOUCH,” the leader cried as Oromis bolted away, toward his house. “The leader used a few profanity words and called out to Oromis, “I wouldn’t go back! They already took it over.” Oromis stopped in his tracks and turns back to them. “They probably have people there already,” the leader continued, “They have come to kill all the fighters. No matter how big or small they come.” Oromis snarled and took a moment to think.

Oromis had nothing to lose. He already knew judo, Jujitsu, karate, and Taekwondo. The small gang of people were no real threat. But the other men, they were inhuman. Oromis has made up his mind.

Oromis trudged over to the street gang and said, “Fine, but we go get my friend. I promised to keep them safe.” “Interesting,” the leader remarked, “A friend. You don’t find many these days.” “Let’s just go already,” Oromis said and they walked on the afternoon sidewalk toward an unsuspecting house a few streets down.

Chapter 4

“Hey little man, we almost there already?” The only person in the gang that had glasses on spoke up. “Shut your mouth, you nerd boy,” the leader offered. Oromis interrupted them saying, “Almost there.” “Here’s a weapon for you. We swiped it from the burly one back there. I don’t know how they made a knife in a iphone case, but here you go.” The leader handed Oromis the gadget and he held it gingerly, then gripped it right as they walked. “That’s the one, my friend’s house.”

Once they got there, they made a plan. Oromis and the guy with glasses (by popular demand) would go in to get the friend. The other’s would guard the house in case anything happened. The front door was unlocked. Suddenly a large fleet of black cars drove head on toward the house just as Oromis and nerd boy disappeared inside. The leader spotted them and swore. “We’ll hold them off boys. You two inside for backup.” The leader pointed at them. Those two boys broke off, one with cheese nunchucks and the other carrying a fence post, guarded behind the first group.

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