Overall, I like it. Possibly a few more photos (bishop, rook) would be helpful. A couple of early thoughts (probably need more coffee so I'd have better thoughts):
- I'd prefer the knight to be a bit "beefier" with slightly more head tilt to the front.
- the bishop seems somehow "incomplete" without the little ball. I understand that's a significant point of breakage but still...
- possibly the bishop's mitre cut could be at slightly more of an angle.
Just some thoughts from an old patzer...
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