Can someone review this game for me?

https://www.chess.com/analysis/game/live/47514055097?tab=review

How about we meet up sometime soon on Chess.com classroom for a free lesson? You can message me to work out the details. Have fun!

-Jordan

Not to be mean (everyone starts out making random moves) but there isnt much to say here. you pull a rook out early, which would make it a target if your opponent were not too busy making pictures with his pawns.  You give up your bishop free on move 10 (pawn takes) but opponent ignores that too.   Basically your opponent largely ignored you until you broke into his area and forced him to respond.   All I can really advise from here is to focus on two things for a good while... 

1) do not hang pieces and take them if your opponents mess it up.  As long as you are giving up pieces for nothing, or ignoring free pieces you could take, not much else can be said.  Once those 2 things stop happening, the strategy begins to open up and its no longer a game of goofed-lost material - got overwhelmed or at least when that happens, its from a trap or combo tactic rather than just shoveling pieces out there in front of pawns to see what happens. 

2) learn the basics of opening ideas.  The really basic ones are control the 4 center squares or fight for them, get your pieces off their starting squares to useful places using only 1 move at first,  queen and rook should not be exposed as targets that force you to retreat them, castle and connect your rooks.   

As a side note, let the computer tell you where you made good and bad moves, it will review your game and mark everything.   Also maybe play the computer low rated bots until you can beat up to say the 500, maybe even 1000* rated ones consistently.   (* their ratings are badly broken and tend to be as much as twice their actual ability).