Is my game good? I won
I don't rlly like move 13, it hangs a pawn and your king is unsafe and a pawn storm has chance of succed.
Move 16 is bad. The whole point of the exchange was to capture back, not ignore it, now you are down a piece
Move 23 and now you hang a piece again
So maybe take a few lessons on king safety and hanging pieces and you'll be fine.