Just a few quick comments.
EDIT: In future, analyse your games yourself first (without a computer) and post what you were thinking at various stages in the game - it helps us help you!
Amatuar analysis plz
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5...dxe4 wins a pawn, can't see why not.
5-10 um... he's all balled up on the king side and your pawns have grabbed a bunch of center space. But I think you play too greedy/impatiently and push the h pawn prematurely (Don't attack until you are developed unless you see a concrete tactical opportunity).
9...f6 was the move. (10.Bxh4? g5) But anyway, the upcoming batch of exchanges are complicated and you come out ahead.
From here to the end of the game there's just tactical error or inaccuracy, one after the other, from both players. Sometimes the errors are simple (hanging pieces) sometimes not so simple.
12. ...Rxh4? Why? 12....Qxh4 is very strong and you've simply won a piece. It is much better.
13....Qg5? Why not reposition your N and be up a piece and have a win. I'd believe Qg5 if you backed it up with some flashy combination, but I don't see it.
14.Nd2? He hangs his N, you don't seem to notice. etc.
thanks for the reply , i will start to analyse my games first. i guess i need to put alot more thought behind why i am doing certain moves, chrz
Nov 9, 2011
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#5
In general, I think your problem is that you're trying to do too many things at once, and that you're ignoring what your opponent is doing a little too much. Every move your opponent makes is for a reason - so try your best to figure out why they did it before you move yourself (or else ask them after the game).
Nov 9, 2011
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#6
here is a humorous game, to lazy to put it in a diagram right now
the end is an omg lol scrathc that its Roflmao
http://www.chess.com/echess/game.html?id=48378967
Nov 9, 2011
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#7
jetfighter13 wrote:
here is a humorous game, to lazy to put it in a diagram right now
the end is an omg lol scrathc that its Roflmao
That is pretty hilarious, but I think you may have the wrong thread?
Hi could somebody please analyse/ give me feedback on this game,
just a beginner so dont expect anything amazing lol.
i played as black and lost, I believe i got infront during the middle game at one point but i always struggle to find the correct move to take advantage of this.
here it is thanks.