Amazing Game - would love feedback from good players

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jojopawns
This game was against the clock and what felt like a much better player. He was ranked 1032 and I was 950 or so.

I know I made a lot of mistakes in the beginning but feel I had an amazing recovery to win. I’d love to get some feedback from some pros if you want to take a look.


[Site "Chess.com iPhone"]
[Date "02/09/2020 12:38PM"]
[White "joshjones2000 (982)"]
[Black "Blekksprut (1052)"]

1.e4 {29:55} e5 {29:57} 2.Nf3 {29:53} Nc6 {29:55} 3.Bc4 {29:47} Nf6 {29:51} 4.d4 {29:21} Bb4+ {29:15} 5.c3 {29:13} Ba5 {29:13} 6.b4 {29:01} Bb6 {29:06} 7.a4 {28:53} a5 {28:31} 8.Be3 {28:15} axb4 {28:24} 9.d5 {27:31} Ne7 {27:20} 10.d6 {26:18} Bxe3 {26:40} 11.dxe7 {25:41} Qxe7 {26:36} 12.fxe3 {25:28} Nxe4 {26:35} 13.Qc1 {23:32} Qc5 {25:26} 14.Nbd2 {21:46} Nxc3 {25:10} 15.O-O {20:00} d6 {24:53} 16.Kh1 {18:18} Bf5 {22:57} 17.Ng5 {17:47} d5 {20:20} 18.Rxf5 {16:19} f6 {20:07} 19.Bb5+ {12:21} c6 {19:46} 20.Ne6 {12:08} Qd6 {18:20} 21.Nxg7+ {11:21} Kf7 {18:06} 22.Qe1 {9:00} Rhg8 {17:50} 23.Be2 {7:16} Rxg7 {17:42} 24.Bh5+ {7:09} Ke6 {17:16} 25.e4 {6:28} dxe4 {17:02} 26.Nxe4 {6:25} Nxe4 {16:50} 27.Qxe4 {6:22} Rag8 {16:06} 28.Bf3 {5:19} b3 {15:04} 29.Rd1 {4:47} Qc5 {13:22} 30.h3 {3:50} Rg3 {13:05} 31.Bg4 {3:26} Re3 {11:27} 32.Rxe5+ {2:05} Kf7 {10:31} 33.Qxh7+ {0:56} Rg7 {9:34} 34.Rd7+ {0:37} Kf8 {9:19} 35.Rd8+ {0:17} Kf7 {8:56} 36.Bh5# {0:15} {joshjones2000 won by checkmate}
Laskersnephew

 

jojopawns
That’s it!
jojopawns
No I said that’s it to the first user that responded posting the game link.

jojopawns
Thanks for your response - I’m just trying to improve and looking for my main weaknesses
JamesColeman

I’m rarely one to criticise, but ‘amazing game’ might have been setting the bar of expectations for what followed, a tad high.

jojopawns
@jamesColeman - sorry to have wasted your time... clearly amazing might look different to a 900 level player than to a 2300 level player like yourself. In any case I was looking for advice on where to improve
jojopawns
@ghost of pushwood yes I agree with the first part.

By the recovery I meant it felt like he had the upper hand the whole game until the end. So really it felt like most of my mistakes were in the beginning
jonnin

10, take the bishop.  Tripled pawns are weak. 

14 is a mistake.  black misses taking e-pawn which looks like trouble for you, and if you move wrong you could even get mated there. 

15 castle puts Q&K into a fork, its protected, for now.  Black continues to ignore e pawn. 

After that its too random, hanging pieces and all out trade war.  35 Qxr++

 

 

 

st0ckfish

 

llamonade2
joshjones2000 wrote:
I know I made a lot of mistakes in the beginning but feel I had an amazing recovery

You won a piece on move ~10 and you were two pieces up before move 20. When was the "amazing recovery?" Before move 10?

Were you losing on move 5 and I missed it? tongue.png

blueemu
Optimissed wrote:

I'll tell him. I'm very diplomatic, tactful and empathetic.

These are useful traits indeed.

jojopawns
Ok folks- THREAD TITLE change “shitty game from an amateur that really enjoyed the game but wanted feedback for learning purposes”.

better ?

Thanks for the feedback though :)
Sred
ghost_of_pushwood wrote:

I believe that's actually German for Blecchbutt.

What?

Sred
ghost_of_pushwood wrote:

I believe that's actually German for Blecchbutt.

Looks like it's Norwegian for octopus.

Grunts2018

I wouldn't say it was 'amazing' but it was a real good scrap and I really enjoyed playing over the game

jojopawns
Haha it’s all good man!
jojopawns
@grunts2018 thanks!