Analysis Please...

Please analysis this and tell my mistakes....

Okay, well I am 12 moves in and already I see a few mistakes.

First off, you got your queen out way to early in my opinion. You want to develop your minor pieces and fight for the center. And as of move 12, you have no minor pieces developed and only one pawn in the center.

14. ..Nd7? loses your pawn in the center but you could have captured on a2 with your queen. Your queenside is almost non existant at this point with makes you vulnerable.

Maybe I am missing something but I didn't see the point of 18. ..e4 unless you planned to capture back with the knight.

Well I didn't look very closely at this but from what I saw, the opening hurt you alot in this game and that's something I'd recommend working on a little.

Also, next time when you post a game for analysis, try to let annotate it a little so we can have an idea of what you were thinking and what some of your plans were etc. so we can more accurately help. :)

thanks for the suggestion... i will keep this in mind for future... although a slightly annotated version of the same game is here...

basically i know that  i m week in end game... so i wanted you all to specially analyse the ending of this game... yes i know that my opening was pathetic in this game... but i feel some how i managed to get back a equalling position from where i can fight back... let me know if i m wrong...

Well, I don't think it was an equal position at the end because he had the a-pawn totally free and the only way you'd be able to stop it was sac a piece. And therefor after that you had no way to push your passed pawn across. But I thought you did well in the middlegame considering he had dominating position the whole game. But as far as the endgame went, I didn't see anyway you could have won really unless he would have made a huge mistake. The opening really hurt and gave him good position. I don't think you made any big mistakes in the endgame, you were just at a big disadvantage going in is what I'm trying to say.

Hope I helped.

I thought once white's f pawn came out, you should have looked for a king side attack.

Your piece development were too late & some silly mistakes......

Move 33: there is a free bishop for white