Could someone annotate this game for me, please?

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I was wondering whether or not someone would help me annotate this game. I tried my best, but I'm a bit fresh at this. So, thanks in advance.

Also, comments on the game itself are welcome too.

 

And if there's anything either side could have done better, please state what. 

~Amanda 


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white could have taken the g pawn instead of trading queens