From observing the game, I saw the moving of the same piece multiple times and it's taking too much time away from development. Also, when your Knight was on c6, you could have moved your rook to b8 to chase the Queen away and make your Rook more powerful than passive.
I did create a mini-free online tactical course that is free with many puzzles and videos. If interested https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/17hb4wjfMuDPVbFp7VsRfwhBrOPc1UF2auUjcB_vwV8k/edit?usp=sharing
[Event "?"]
[Site "Chess.com iPhone"]
[Date "2023.06.28"]
[Round "?"]
[White "aishaaaaa23"]
[Black "KetarianRaider"]
[Result "0-1"]
[FEN "rnbqkbnr/pppppppp/8/8/8/8/PPPPPPPP/RNBQKBNR w KQkq - 0 1"]
[WhiteElo "529"]
[BlackElo "609"]
1. e3 e5 2. c3 Nc6 3. Qb3 Qe7 4. Nf3 Nf6 5. Ng5 d6 6. Qc4 Be6 7. Qb5 Bd7 8. Qxb7 Rd8 9. b3 e4 10. Qb5 Ne5 11. Qb7 Neg4 12. h3 Ne5 13. Ba3 h6 14. Nf3 Nxf3+ 15. gxf3 exf3 16. Bb5 Bxb5 17. Qxb5+ Qd7 18. Qc4 Be7 19. Rg1 d5 20. Qd3 c5 21. Rxg7 Ne4 22. c4 Nxf2 23. Kxf2 Qxh3 24. Qxd5 Qh2+ 25. Ke1 Qe2# {0-1}