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ICWIENER

 Here is my game, could you please tell me what I could improve on, what I did wrong, what I did well, etc.

I would really appreciate it. =)

ICWIENER

I'd really appreciate it. =)

yourbetteroffasian

7.f3? If you want a stonewall opening you can play that but you have just blocked the best sqaure for your knight.

11. Re1. not the queen because he can block with his queen and have a good queen trade.

 

The rest was decent

your opponent played pretty badly x]

Scarblac

4.e5 would have sent that knight back to g8. Why develop when you can undevelop your opponent? :-)

ICWIENER

Any more comments?

Thanks for them so far

mosqutip

I don't think I can respectfully analyze a game by someone named 'ICWiener'

ICWIENER

I chose the name from a Tv show, don't judge me

mosqutip

Futurama?

erikido23
ICWIENER wrote:

I chose the name from a Tv show, don't judge me


 If you really didn't want to judged then you wouldn't/shouldn't choose an ID like that. 

ICWIENER

Yes from Futurama, and if you guys were mature enough you wouldn't judge people just from their name(cover). Like the saying: ''Never judge a book by its cover''. Ever heard of it?

erikido23
ICWIENER wrote:

Yes from Futurama, and if you guys were mature enough you wouldn't judge people just from their name(cover). Like the saying: ''Never judge a book by its cover''. Ever heard of it?


 I didn't judge you.  I just thought it was an immature name. 

 

You can not control the way people perceive you.  You can only control the way you act. 

Whether or not that came from a movie or tv show or whatever.  That IS an immature name.  I am not judging you I am judging what YOU chose to put  up as your handle.   

TheGrobe

Man we're an uptight lot.

ICWIENER

Well then maybe I should create a different account since I never knew people on this site would care that much what I put as my 'handle'.

Maradonna

You dominated this game. There ain't really much to say, you weren't challenged. You did well though, looking for ways to increase the pressure and expose his/her main weakness - the uncaslted king. You'd be better off posting a lost game - then people can tell you where you went wrong. You've got the beating of this person because they're a few hundred below you.

oh, I don't mind your handle.

TheGrobe

10. exd5 was good -- e5 may have been tempting, but I think you're better to open up the position with his King still in the centre and yours safely castled away.

11. Re1 would have been better than Qe1 as you played.

12. Nh4+ to win the pawn with discovered check was good, but I think I might have played Bxg5 here instead, pinning the Knight.

19. Ne4 hangs your Bishop.  Be4 was clearly the best move here -- I think you're lucky that your opponent played 19...Qe6 instead of Qb6 sealing your Bishop's fate.

20. Qd2 is a nice idea, but it blocks your bishop -- Qd1 might have been better.

20... Rxa8 is a clear blunder by your opponent that loses the Queen.

The rest is not really worth analysing.

erikido23
TheGrobe wrote:

Man we're an uptight lot.


 I didn't even care.  I was just saying if he was going to put something like that he shouldn't be surprised if someone is offended. 

mosqutip

Good news everyone! It's a chess website, calm down.

ICWIENER

That was unneeded

erikido23
mosqutip wrote:

Good news everyone! It's a chess website, calm down.


 Says the guy who says I can't respectfully analyze a game by a guy named ICWIENER.  lmao.  You are something else

JorgenB
ICWIENER wrote:

 

 Here is my game, could you please tell me what I could improve on, what I did wrong, what I did well, etc.

 

I would really appreciate it. =)


1. Engagement

2. Working hard

3. Join a chess club