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Avatar of harrypotter1994

So my questions are
1) Would you have played the opening moves any differently and
2) Would you have mated differently than me? 

Avatar of anaxagoras

I don't normally play 1 g3, but it is a fine opening move.  Where I go differently is after Black's 1...g5.  Consider an immediate 2 d4 or e4.

Through your first 7 moves, I would not double fianchetto my bishopes.  Again, I would want to gain central space with my center pawns, instead.  And because of Black's kingside weakness, I might not castle kingside so quickly in order to keep the possibility of h4 to meet Black's g5.  Luckily, Black is daydreaming through the opening...

 

When you ask if there's a faster way to checkmate, I think you mean after 24...Kxc7?  You may want to simply consult a chess engine for that. 

But I play 25 Qf3 instead of Qe2...  It coordinates my Q with my B and makes them an attacking pair. 

Avatar of harrypotter1994

What would e4 have gained me in the starting moves?

I see the point about central space, and have seen many great games with the use of central space. I did see the kingside weakness, but as soon as I Fianchettoed my second bishop, I had the option of going up the Queenside whilst using a rook to protect my Queen. 

Avatar of anaxagoras

e4 would open up your queen's diagonal to the critical h5 square.  You may not have an attack right away, but threatening it can help to create weaknesses.

e4 would also prevent Black from winning the center, which a thinking opponent would have tried to do versus white's mechanical development.

You should never consider play on the flank unless your opponent's breakthrough in the center is impossible.

Try your double fianchetto opening against a computer and see what happens.Sealed

Avatar of billwall
It looks like 8...O-O is wrong.  Black should play 8...b4 and perhaps 9...Nh5 and try to trade Bishops.  After 8...O-O? 9.axb5, Black can't play 9...axb5 without losing the rook.  Now, instead of 10.bxa6, White should play 10.Nxg5! hxg5 11.Bxa8, winning the rook.
Avatar of chopra
blacks were very careless about the game, many mistakes.
Avatar of harrypotter1994

Did whit castle at the right time? I did capture black's rook with my knight that was part of my defence, but succeding that the a file was opened up.

I see the H5 square attack now.  

Avatar of Etienne
Why don't you try to figure out your mistakes in a game that you lost? Instead of caring if you castled at the right time in a gamewhere it is obviously irrelevant.
Avatar of harrypotter1994
I was white, and I won.
Avatar of Etienne
harrypotter1994 wrote: I was white, and I won.

 My point, exactly.

Avatar of anaxagoras
I'm having a deja vu feeling from This Is Spinal Tap.  "But ours go to 11!"
Avatar of Prodigy
well to me both played careless, there were a lot of mistakes that are just too much to mention, but since you were white and capitlized on blacks very poor play, ill start with g3 well i just hate that openingyour first moves were to build ur defense, while if black had the slightest skill he would be able to attack you and win because of that he played g5 and castled in that direction, but the mate was good though
Avatar of Daemon_Panda

I can say that black should have gone with 1... e5

 

Avatar of Daemon_Panda
yeah you should have played e4 around move 5
Avatar of harrypotter1994
I liked my opening. Maybe not the second version on the other side fo the board. Got another game about to finish using King's Indian Attack, and I made less mistakes (apart from losing my Queen).
Avatar of NathamCrewott
22.Re1 wins the Queen, right?
Avatar of batgirl
I agree with Etienne.
Avatar of Sprite

I don't know.  When I rockclimb, I "downclimb", or sort of climb down and notice all the foot/hand holds I missed.  Although I made it to the top, I see all the potential holds that might've made the climb easier.  Although I agree reviewing a loss is a good idea, reviewing a win isn't necessarily a bad idea either, as you can look for tactical plays you missed.  I've won games (in blitz atleast) where I won a piece, lost a piece, and then won after a closely contested endgame.  I think these games are important to review as well.

As for the game, black's play was goofy, for lack of a better word.

 

Avatar of batgirl

I once showed a blitz game, a muzio, to a friend of mine, a particularly astute player, in which I had devastated my opponent in, I don't know, 2 dozen moves or so. The reason was to demonstrate the power of a certain line I had adopted at the time. He looked over my game and said it was wonderful (awwww...) and the only criticism he could think of was where I had missed mate in two on move 13. .. well... duh...

He told me the lesson to be learned was simply to never analyze blitz games.

A corollary might be, never analyze a game where your opponent played poorly.

 

There are reasons for showing a won game. One is because you're proud of it and want to show it off.. as good a reason as any. Another reason is to verify that the problems you posed to your opponent, that he failed to solve and thereby lost, were indeed irrefutable... that your moves (or plan) were solid and not just apparitions made to seem solid through your opponent's mistakes. In this, you learn something and grow. Once you do opt to show a game you won, for whatever reason, you've opened yourself to critical analysis and must accept it without justifying or explaining - the move list tells the reviewer everything he need to know. It's sharky waters out there, I know.

 

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