White needs to make less one move threats, to develop the pieces instead of making many pawn moves and get the king castled to safety before attacking.
What is itenddarrabbits? Is it something to do with rabbits? It end dar rabbits?
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I made this diagram for itenddarabbits after our game to try to show him hhis mistakes and stuph. Is there anything else anyone would like to add to this?