I would love to if you'll have me :D
Any high rated players want to play a match and talk?
My definition of high rated is basically around 1700. I know that that's not technically high in the grand scheme of elo, but, compared to my elo, it would be a substantial improvement over my own ranking.

Just looking at your most recent game your problem is hanging pieces. Just try to check that all your pieces are protected. Practice makes perfect in this domain. You will bit by bit get a better instinct just keep on playing.
Yeah, I noticed that more. It's really just a matter of me being impatient and refusing to go through the checks as needed. I play too quickly given that I play on 30 minutes.
I learned everything else as a kid by playing those much better than me. In football, in video games, etc., playing those better than me and hearing their constructive criticism and adapting to the level of play caused me to perform better.
As well as this, it would also be nice to be able to talk about chess on some level. No one around me, friends, colleagues, etc., play chess, so it would be nice to have someone to speak with.