Could any high rated players help me?

hi I'm not a high rated person but OK. I would like to see them... why don't you consider to post your games that can be played directly. (by sharing pgn option)

hi I am not very good at chess but I will try my best. 

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game 4

cheers

Try contacting xisco949. He is a good coach and should be able to help you. Tell him Thunder sent you;)

You did not seem to have a plan in the late opening (...c6, ...c5) and made some risky choices about your king's safety and pawn structure.  However, your opponent was not able to take advantage of these, and put his bishop on a square where it had difficulty retreating.  You did well spotting this and exploiting it to gain a winning advantage.