Hi Juraldo,
Thanks for sharing your video analysis of the game from the latest Yu - Grischuk game! I liked the way you shared explanations after the moves (using arrows and highlighting squares is nice!) as well adding in short variations for alternative moves that weren't played in the game to show why they weren't played. I also enjoyed the fact that the video was about 10 minutes long with a good explanation of moves and variations (not too short, not too long).
My suggestions is to go through some alternative lines that weren't played in the game (e.g White could have also tried XXX with the idea of XXX) especially for lines which you may have found interesting. Also at the end where Yu resigned you said there are many ways to win, but it would be great if you could perhaps show a line shows Black's winning plan (e.g pawn to c4, dxc4 d3, xxx c2 etc). I saw that you highlighted the c4 move on the board, but I think you may have forgotten to talk about it. Another thing is if you could show where you think the losing player went wrong and maybe show alternative move/s that would give the player that lost better chances than in the game (like maybe for that game, white should have brought back their pieces instead going for an attack since their attack was slower). Hope these comments help!
Hi!
I just posted an analysis of a nice win by Grischuk: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KSm7nCuGza0
Since I just started this, I would be very grateful if you give me some comment on what you like, what you dislike etc.
Thanks