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Max Harmonist

ist nicht mehr. Mit ihm hat die deutsche Schachwelt einen ihrer liebenswürdigsten Meister verloren. Wenn er auch seit langem nicht mehr in die Öffentlichkeit trat und in den letzten Jahren infolge seiner Krankheit matt gesetzt war, so ist er doch auch in den Kreisen unserer Bundesmitglieder von seinen wiederholten Besuchen in Bayern (u. a. als Kiebitz im 96er Nürnberger Meisterturnier) in angenehmster Erinnerung geblieben. Wir bringen deshalb mit freundlicher Genehmigung des Verfassers den Nachruf, den Herr Dr. Tarrasch dem Entschlafenen im "Lokal-Anzeiger" widmet.

Max Harmonist

is no more. With him, the German chess world has lost one of their most amiable masters. Even if he has not been appearing in public for a long time, checkmated during the last years due to his illness, he is being remembered most likeably also among the members of our [Bavarian] chess association from his repeated visits to Bavaria (for example from when he was kiebitzing [observing chess as a spectator] in the Nuremberg masters tournament in 1896).  Therefore, with kind permission by the author, we hereby republish the obituary dedicated to the deceased by Mr. Dr. Tarrasch in a local [Berlin] newspaper [named "Lokal-Anzeiger"].

"Am 16. d. Mts. starb nach längerer Krankheit im Alter von 42 Jahren der Königliche Tänzer Max Harmonist, der seit Jahrzehnten eine allen Schachfreunden Berlins wohlbekannte Persönlichkeit war. Im Jahre 1880 tauchte in der Schachecke des Cafe Royal ein blutjunges Bürschchen auf, welches kaum die Anfangsgründe des Schachspiels kannte, aber durch seine rapiden Fortschritte darin in kurzer Zeit die Stammgäste des Cafes in Erstaunen setzte und deshalb "der kleine Morphy" genannt wurde — seinen wahren Namen kannte man gar nicht, ebensowenig wußte man, daß er dem Corps de ballet der königlichen Oper angehörte. Im folgenden Jahre gewann er bereits im Nebenturnier des Berliner Schachkongresses den ersten Preis, und bald zählte er zu den stärksten Spielern Berlins, mit denen er sich täglich in einem der beiden Schachcafes, dem Cafe Royal und dem Cafe Kaiserhof, maß. Im Jahre 1885 beteiligte er sich an dem
Hauptturnier des Hamburger Schachkongresses und errang wiederum trotz sehr starker Beteiligung den ersten Preis und damit die Meisterwürde des Deutschen Schachbundes. Nun versuchte er sich auch auf internationalen Meisterturnieren, zu Frankfurt 1887 und Breslau 1889, aber seine Kraft reichte nicht aus, um mehr als Achtungserfolge zu erringen, trotz mehrfacher glänzender Einzelleistungen.

"On the 16th of this month, after prolonged illness, royal dancer Max Harmonist died at the age of 42. For decades, he has been a well-known personality in the Berlin chess player community. In 1880, in the chess corners of the Cafe Royal, there appeared a very young little guy, who hardly knew the very basics of chess, but who within short time amazed the regular guests with his rapid progress at the game. He was therefore called "the little Morphy" - his true name was unknown, just as one did not know that he was part of the Corps de Ballet of the Royal Opera. As soon as in the following year, he won the first price in the side tournament of the Berlin Chess Congress, and soon he was one of the strongest players in Berlin, pitting his strength against them daily in one of the two chess cafés, the Cafe Royal and the Cafe Kaiserhof. In 1885, he took part in the main tournament of the Hamburg Chess Congress, winning first place again in spite of a strong field of participants and thereby was declared a chess master of the German Chess Federation. In the following, he also tried himself at international master tournaments, in Frankfurt 1887 and in Breslau 1889, but his powers were not sufficient for more than des succès d'estime [performances that allowed him to show that he can play strongly or that allow others to respect and/or praise him for his play, but that are no real successes in terms of really having been able to contend for the top places], even though several times, he showed brilliant performances in single games.

Und nun zeigte er eine solche seltene Selbstkritik und Urteilskraft, daß er dies sofort einsah und sich von weiteren Beteiligungen an großen Turnieren zurückhielt, obwohl er an glänzender Begabung die Mehrzahl der Dii minorum gentium übertraf. Nur selten noch spielte er im Cafe Kaiserhof, dessen täglicher Stammgast er war, eine Partie Schach. Dafür suchte er sich neben seinem Beruf als Königlicher Tänzer - der ihn auskömmlich ernährte — ein anderes Feld der Betätigung. Ohne jede höhere Schulbildung, hatte er einen ausgesprochenen
Bildungstrieb, den er durch fleißige Lektüre und häufigen Theaterbesuch nährte. So eignete er sich nach und nach ein recht gutes Urteil über alles, was zum Theater gehört, an, und da ihn sein gemütlicher, echt Berliner Witz und seine liebenswürdige Bonhommie überall beliebt machten, so wurde er bald ein Hauptredner des Stammtischs 'Größenwahn' im Cafe Kaiserhof, an dem Ende der achtziger Jahre jeden Nachmittag die jugendlichen Literatur-Heißsporne zusammenkamen, um dem damals aufstrebenden Naturalismus Geburtshelferdienste zu leisten. Alle Welt kannte ihn, und er kannte alle Welt, sogar Männer wie Gerhart Hauptmann und Emanuel Reicher schätzten das Urteil des kleinen lebhaften Kerlchens. Als die Duse zum ersten Male nach Berlin kam, war er es, der dem Staunen von Kritik und Publikum den prägnantesten Ausdruck lieh: "eine Offenbarung", so nannte er ihr Spiel, und dies Urteil wurde allseitig akzeptiert. Zu eigener schriftstellerischer Betätigung hat er es nicht gebracht, und auch ein Plan, vom Ballett zum Schauspiel überzugehen, schlug fehl, da sein Talent, wie er — wiederum mit kluger Selbstkritik — sagte, nur allenfalls für die Provinz, aber nicht für Berlin ausreichend war, und er sich um alles in der Welt von seiner Vaterstadt nicht hätte trennen mögen. Vor wenigen Jahren zeigten sich bei ihm die ersten Symptome der Paralyse, der er nun zum Opfer gefallen ist. Die Schachfreunde Berlins sowie alle, die ihn näher kennen zu lernen Gelegenheit hatten, werden seiner originellen Persönlichkeit ein freundliches Andenken bewahren. Nachstehend bringen wir einige seiner zahlreichen Glanzpartien."

And at this point he showed such a rare ability of self-criticism and power of judgement that he recognized this immediately and refrained from participating in further international tournaments, even if in terms of brilliant talent he exceeded the majority of the Dii minorum gentium [Latin -> the "lesser gods"]. He took to only rarely playing a game of chess in the Cafe Kaiserhof, of which he was a daily regular guest. Instead he chose another field for his activities - beside his profession as a royal dancer which was providing him subsistence. Not having attended any higher school, he had a pronounced appetite for education, which he nourished with regular reading and frequent visits to theaters. So by and by he acquired good judgement of everything pertaining to theater, and as his cozy and witty Berliner nature and his amiable bonhomie were making him popular everywhere, he soon became one of the main speakers at the "Stammtisch Größenwahn" [a regulars' table the name of which alludes to discussions of high-flying topics] in  the Cafe Kaiserhof, at which at the end of the 1880ies the youthful literature enthusiasts came together every afternoon in order to provide their obstetrician services to the then-uprising Naturalism [So they discussed ideas that were coming to be ideas in Naturalism, which was not only a literary movement, but also a movement in theater]. Everyone knew him, and he knew everyone, even men such as Gerhart Hauptmann and Emanuel Reicher appreciated the judgement of this small lively fellow. When the Duse [Eleonora Duse, great theater actress of the 19th century] came to Berlin for the first time, it was him who voiced the amazement of critics and audience most concisely: "a revelation" he called her performance, and this judgement was universally accepted. He did not get to be a writer himself, and also a plan to change from ballet dancer to theater actor failed, because, as he himself said - once again with prudent self-criticism - his talent may have been sufficient for the province, but not for Berlin, and he would not for anything in the world have wanted to part with his home town. A few years ago, he began to show the first symptoms of the paralysis he has now succumbed to. The community of Berlin chess players, as well as all who had the chance to get to know him more closely, will amiably remember his inventive personality. Below we show some of the numerous brilliant chess games he played."


It is easily understandable that automated translation machines (and probably most amateur translators) have their difficulties with this text. Smile

Have fun with my translation.

In some cases, instead of starting to make footnotes, I have included in [] brackets and blue color some explanatory translator's comments that might be helpful for you.

RenataCFC

I had to do this, as a test of my long-lost German competence.  I took efforts to make the syntax easier on the American reader! :)  There are a few ommissions or uncertainties, and certainly some inaccuracies, but mostly it should be faithful to the original.

 

 

Max Harmonist

is no more.  In him the German chess world has lost one of its most beloved masters.  Despite that he had not appeared in public for some time and in recent years was checkmated by his illness, in local chess circles he nevertheless remained in the most pleasant memory due to his repeated visits to Bavaria (for example as kibitzer in the '96 Nurnberg master's tournament).  Therefore we are happy to bring you the news that Dr. Tarrasch reports of the departed in the "Lokal-Anzeiger". [A newspaper, presumably.]

"On the 16th of this month, the royal dancer [literally "kingly dancer" -- seems he danced in the king's opera?] Max Harmonist died after a long illness, at the age of 42 years.  For decades he had been a well-known personality to all chess-enthusiasts of Berlin.  In the year 1880, a young rascal turned up in the chess corners of the Cafe Royal.  He hardly knew the basic rules of the game of chess, but advanced so rapidly that in a short time he left the Cafe's regulars in astonishment and so was called "the little Morphy".  No one knew his real name, and even less did anyone know that he belonged to the corps de ballet of the royal opera.  In the following year, he had already won the first prize in the tournament of the Berlin Chess Congress, and soon he counted among the strongest chess players of Berlin, against whom he measured himself daily in one of the two chess cafes, Cafe Royal and Cafe Kaiserhof.  In 1885 he participated in the main tournament of the Hamburg Chess Congress and attained the first prize against strong competition, from which he attained the title of Master from the German chess federation.  He then tried himself in international master's tournaments, at Frankfurt 1887 and Breslau 1889, but his strength was not sufficient to attain more than [don't know this word -- literally "attention success", so something like "notice"?], despite numerous brilliant individual showings.

And now he showed such rare self-criticism and power of judgment, that he immediately understood this and held himself back from further participation in large tournaments, although he exceeded the majority of the [Dii minorum gentium -- some Latin term I guess] in the brilliancy of his gift.  Only rarely did he still play a game of chess at Cafe Kaiserhof, where he had been a regular.  Therefore he searched out -- in addition to his profession as a royal dancer, which nourished him admirably [not sure if this is meant metaphorically or literally!] -- another field of endeavor.  Without any higher education, he had a pronounced drive toward learning, which he nourished by much reading and frequent visits to the theater.   By and by he obtained very good discernment over everything theater-related, and since his charming true Berlin wit and likable bonhommie made him overall much loved, soon he was a main speaker at the "Grossenwahn" regular's table at the Cafe Kaiserhof, where at the end of the '80s the young literary hotshots met together to help birth the then-emerging Naturalism.  [I'm a bit at a loss here; I'm assuming Naturalism was a literary movement of the time.]   All the world knew him, and he knew all the world; even men like Gerhardt Hauptmann and Emanual Reicher prized the judgment of the lively little rascal.  When the "Duse" [no idea, but from context I think either a female playwright or a female actress] came to Berlin for the first time, it was he who lent to the critics and public of Berlin the most pregnant expression: "a revelation", he called her play [or her acting], and this judgment was accepted on all sides.

He did not aspire to a writer's profession, and his plan to cross over from ballet to acting fell short, for his talent, as he himself said -- again with astute self-criticism -- sufficed in the end only for the provices and not for Berlin; and he could not separate from his home city for anything in the world.  In few years the first signs of the paralysis showed, to which he has now fallen victim.  The chess enthusiasts of Berlin, as with all who had opportunity to know him well, would like to offer his unique personality a friendly remembrance: below we give some of his many brilliant games."

batgirl

Thank you both, CM ilmago and RenataCFC. I really do appreciate your efforts (as well as that of everyone else)

Salander

No stone left unturned :)

jllister

I would be happy to translate this for you if you still require one.  John

batgirl

Thank you very much for your kind offer, but I think I have what I need.