Mate in 3 puzzles with funny comments

I just started a series of Mate in 3 problems that I converted to video with comments that are a bit off beat to explain the solution. The idea is to attract a larger audience and make chess entertaining. I thought Youtube shorts could be consumed quickly and since it is video, it can be paused to find the solution. I plan to produce around 500. Let me know what you think and how I can improve on the formula if you do not like it. On the positive side, feel free to contribute statements I can use for the narration. I have something like Chuck Norris only needs one move to mate in 3. Here is a complete solution:
"White, wonders if luggage will make it to h6 as well, checks on Tik Tok because a lot has happened since the last move,
Black, cannot control the wind but adjusts the sail to h8,
White's player is Uber riding to f7, checks on Instagram because there is always a new picture between moves,
Black's player, says there better be good coffee on g8,
White's player advances to h8 while looking at the scenery, deposits a checkmate, like a million dollars.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCFkJqTAgoVa09ZmtS9BN1Vg

just watched all 5 and subscribed, keep up the good work. I'll be looking out for more just like this one'

Hey thanks, I just read your comments. very nice !