As you see, Stockfish score suddenly rises from big minus to big plus 20 moves later, so Stockfish can't see anything at the root.
It has weak evaluation, unlike me, lol, and therefore it is hopeless here.
This is a position reqiring the implementation of wild sharp imbalances (material/pawn for the bishop pair + center and initative), and so extremely hard for even top GMs, not to mention mere mortals.
That's why almost everyone will miss it, lol.
Yes. Please do not give so-called "book moves" exclamation marks...…..and don't put an exclamation on every second move (first game)
Explain the "why" before the "how". Eg. In your first chapter, explain what tempo is and why it's important before giving the games as examples. Don't bombard your reader with a series of games right off the bat. Also, make it clear in your annotations what the game has to do with the chapter. Just from the way you are writing, I can tell this book is geared towards lower rated players. Lower rated players will likely not understand words like "tempo" or "pin".
Every move also doesn't need an annotation -- not to mention some of the annotations don't make much sense. Eg. game 2 move 9. I also feel like you spend more time discussing the opening moves than the actually "content" of the game
This was just from skimming the free preview.
Then read the full book first, and then try to comment.
Otherwise, it doesn't make much sense.
When you start reading a games collection, you already know basic tactics, so what a pin or a tempo is, right?
The book is not for absolute beginners, it is more advanced next to Logical Chess, and even Chernev doesn't explain what tempo is.
But when you see a clear instance of lower-power piece attacking a stronger piece or a pawn attacking an enemy piece that need to retreat, you immediately get the clue, right?
Which annotations don't make much sense - please, concrete examples.
Maybe it's just your impression.
One reader censored me for the fact I claimed 1.Nf3?! is not optimal compared to 1. e4, 1.c4 and 1.d4, but that's absolutely true.
You NEVER get an advantage with white after 1.Nf3, even 1.Nf6 mirroring fully equalises.
So 1.Nf3 is really a subpar option, hard to understand?
Is my claim past the point or inaccurate?
I've been investigating a lot before making such claims.
There are many opening variations, but there are a negligible portion of overall chess content, so I guess your impression on the opening issue is also a bit off.
Hey Lyudmil.....thanks for responding to my feedback. I find that many people don't often do that, so I really appreciate it
I can't actually read the full book, since I can't find the pdf anywhere online, which means I have to order it. I can't really order anything unless its Christmas or my birthday -- both of which have already recently passed.
In regards to your comment about understanding words like "tempo", or those relevant to the chapter, I still believe it would be most beneficial to provide a brief explanation before the games. Or even a brief explanation of the chapter itself. What you did was you just presented the game and expected the readers to piece it together without an intro -- based off of one game! (Also recommend adding in more games) Highly established authors such as Jacob Aagaard often add brief introductions in their books and I (personally) find it really helpful.
About the annotations, I think that they are a bit overzealous. For example, game 2 move 9 for White
"9. Rg5 Again. Seemingly a bit flirtatious, but very very efficient"
I just don't understand what that's supposed to mean. I mean, I understand that the rook is attacking the queen, but you didn't have to add that comment, it just sounds way too confusing / over enthusiastic, if you know what I mean. You say that the readers can comprehend the fact that "a lower-power piece attacks a higher-power piece thus forcing it to move". Well, this is the same concept! You don't need to point it out with excessively detailed annotations.
About the Nf3 thing. I do thing that it is slightly worse than either e4 or d4 (but then again, who am i to speak -- an advocate for b3 and a3), but it definitely shouldn't be given a "?!". That annotation is usually given for a dubious move, which I wouldn't even give to a3 or b3. Rather a "!?" should be given, if anything at all. Although I guess this is just a matter of preference.
Anyways, thanks so much for taking the time to thoroughly read through my feedback, and I'm definitely considering getting this book (or The Secret of Chess) the next time my birthday comes around.
Sincerely,
@1_a31-0