yep its good.
Is Pay Day! (Qhx1)
all is not lost! you get a piece and a rook for a queen! its bad to an extent but you can still win!ive seen a game where a queen was exchanged for a rook, knight and a pawn!cant remember who won.its wasnt one of my games.
Has no one noticed that the two diagrams are different which is actually fairly fundamental in determining white's ability to save material when protecting his Queen. 

Now the queen is at the corner, you know whats going to happen?
Is Pay back time !
LOL what were you thinking!
Oh here is something I did:
Please comment on whats wrong ><!