I was responding to your “poem”, which I assume didn’t borrow as much thought as I poured into #41
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I was responding to your “poem”, which I assume didn’t borrow as much thought as I poured into #41
I was responding to your “poem”, which I assume didn’t borrow as much thought as I poured into #41
Apr 3, 2026
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#43
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here's mine it's called "in parasite's paradise"
i want to be just like you
i’ll be your mouth that chews your food
your hands
your hair
each cavity
and the rot
inside your tooth.
i breathe so i can own your breath
your eyes im better swallowed in
i end my life
to live your death
these feet
our steps
i’m fallen in
and i am very small
complete
within your walls
just
listening
to your gush
boil red current
bone-padding blood rush
how could i ever be too much?
i’d love to have you for (my) lunch
to be the tongue withdrawn its questions
your stab
self sabotage
in my direction
you are what i know-
what i want
is what i know;
i am the mirror
in your self obsessed reflection.
we smell roses
eat sh/t
blow our noses
pig pen
each year there’s less fear
we’ve forgotten our name
our mother
my brain
sleeping in sickness
and totally tame
no one knows but us
exactly what our life is;
more than any virus,
forever yours infection
here’s to happy anniversary
to my special
predilection <3
edit: i'm so sad it didn't do the stanzas cus it sounds better with the indentations and all that):
I honestly like the lack of line breaks; not to oppose your creative liberty there, but I think it aids in the confluence of the different thoughts you express in the poem. It’s really good and pretty inventive — not so much in style, the format/rhyme scheme is pretty traditional — but the concept isn’t one I’ve seen before. I like it :)
I’d love to hear some more poetry if you ever write something else
I’d love to hear some more poetry if you ever write something else
Apr 3, 2026
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#45
thanks! i'm working on a popup book series rn and write every day lol i'd luv to trade writing prompts or something sometime :3 i need more writing buddies fr
#46
Same! idk very many people that write (well), so I could use some more writing buddies too
Same! idk very many people that write (well), so I could use some more writing buddies too
Accepted!
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Hi Zee! Do you have another poem? Your last one was great!
#54
Don’t be self-effacing; I’m sure they’re great. If you want, you could also just dm them to me if you don’t wanna share publicly. I would really love to hear some more of your work :)
Don’t be self-effacing; I’m sure they’re great. If you want, you could also just dm them to me if you don’t wanna share publicly. I would really love to hear some more of your work :)
Apr 4, 2026
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#56
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LXkeiBVISVVBMcN_etldMKXRJDTTu6IQYQ_l8LiQ2eY/edit?usp=drivesdk
Ok that’s fire
I see some parallels to your last poem—does the ephemeral nature of certain parts of life resonate with you in some way (if you don’t mind sharing?)
Apr 4, 2026
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#60
Uh... Honestly I'd say that most of my poems aren't always relatable to me, nor are they based on real life experiences all the time. That might be because they're all very lazily written and I just write the first thing that comes to mind, so I don't really intend to write poems about things that I think are relatable to me especially. Some of them (exceptionally) are sometimes based on things from real life, the two poems I posted here (are not the only ones that I've written) are indeed somewhat based on how I see the world, but I have some poems that are just pure imagination, not being based off of things that have happened to me in any way ^^
bru what.