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rogers303 wrote:
Put wollensock into the story too!
I do need new characters... so sure... but you will have to wait a little bit
I literally just read this entire forum for 20 minutes. You have an interesting story .
Thank you! I appreciate any help I get from your readers
Chapter Eighteen: Dragon, fire breather or not?
Last time: Jen was screaming her head off in terror at the puppetmaster who had her leg in his grasp. As Tomato approached, the puppetmaster growled and said, “I smell another. Call it off and you maybe may live.” Jen yells, “Flee! Leave me! I’ll be fine!” Tomato listens with uncertainty as the puppetmaster puts a gag in Jen’s mouth and moves back into the shadows.
Meanwhile:
Mint and Werewolf both yelled “WAIT!!” at Leo. Leo said “What else do you need? You appear to have nothing stolen, broken, or otherwise taken or harmed.” Werewolf explained that they needed his help in another dimension and would need his help and any friends with him. Leo said, “I have a friend! His name is Dragon!” “Does he have powers or anything to help us?” replied Mint. “Not fire powers but powers nonetheless. Give me a minute or two and I will get him!” Leo hopped off the roof, hopefully to not die.
Meanwhile:
Ryan had exploded the c4 and just gotten out of the tent when the tent got the air knocked out of it, literally. Ryan saw a tent covered silhouette that appeared to be in a suit or something big. As Ryan ran away from the tent as fast as he could as the suit and Holo emerged, the suit bulging through the canvas as though it was papier-mâché.
Interesting. Give me a moment
Next Saturday
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Chapter Nineteen: Adbuction, at its finest
Last time: Ryan had exploded the c4 and just gotten out of the tent when the tent got the air knocked out of it, literally. Ryan saw a tent covered silhouette that appeared to be in a suit or something big. As Ryan ran away from the tent as fast as he could as the suit and Holo emerged, the suit bulging through the canvas as though it was papier-mâché.
Meanwhile:
Dragon was posting something on chess.com and then saw something flash blue behind him next to the window. Leo appeared on the outside of the window and yelled at her to... “Come On Dragon!! I need you!!” Dragon looked at the window and ran to the window, except when he moved, it was only toward the portal. Dragon saw a page of paper and grabbed it as he went through the portal.
Leo climbed the buildings and takes to Werewolf and Mint about what just happened. Werewolf and Mint both exclaimed, “Dragon’s been abducted!!”
Same
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