POEM

TO ConnorMacleod..........

Standing in the hot sun,missing you and alone,

I hear the expected words,"Your going home."

But I have no arms to hold you,

Only my heart and love is true.

Prepared to give my life for freedom,

So others can be free.

But I stand here thinking,

I wish you were close to me.

Only two more days before I depart,

I yearn for the day,to feel your tremulous heart.

Beating deeply within your tender breast,

To smell your hair,as you rest gently on my chest.

I could go on but not sure if this is what you envisaged, Please dont moan at me !!!  Clive.

wow!! that is brilliant Clive. Good work :)

I was writing on personal experience last February, i can't really say much more about it.

Do I have your permission to post your poem on the the armed forces site?

To Connor............

you certainly have my permission,and may use it, with out using my name,

if that is your will.  Clive

Nice Clive, I dont think CM could of said it better himself

I wrote it quickly as a kind of challenge to myself. Sorry you found it prosaic, but I didn't use a rhyming dictionary. It can take some time to write a really good poem, and I don't think that these forums are on that schedule.

To Electricpawm............

OK  thats fine, but well done,  Clive.

The scene... young girl dies during unforeseen events...the tragedy haunts the writer to this day...

Need to do a bit more work on this one.. (its work in progress).. geezuzz!!! i have so much work in progress LOL!!

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I will not feel your touch again,

or watch you as you sleep,

pick up your clothes, hear you sing,

the sadness makes my heart weep.

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Na je nun ta sa ro un in gan jo gin yo ja
Ko pi han ja ne yo yu rul a neun pum gyo gi nun yo ja
Ba mi o myon shim ja ngi tu go wo ji nun yo ja
Gu ron ban jon i nun yo ja

Na nun sa na ye
Na je nun no man kum ta sa ro un gu ron sa na ye
Ko pi shik gi do jo ne one shot te ri nun sa na ye
Ba mi o myon shim ja ngi to jyo bo ri nun sa na ye
Gu ron sa na ye

A rum de wo sa rang su ro wo
Gu re no hey gu re ba ro no hey
A reum de wo sa rang su ro wo
Gu re no hey gu re ba ro no hey
Ji gum bu to gal de ka ji ga bol ka

Oppan Gangnam Style
Gangnam Style
Op op op op oppan Gangnam Style
Gangnam Style
Op op op op oppan Gangnam Style

Eh~ Sexy lady
Op op op op oppan Gangnam Style
Eh~ Sexy lady
Op op op op
Eh eh eh eh eh eh

Jong su ke bo wi ji man nol ten no nun yo ja
I te da shi pu myon mu ko ton mo ri pu nun yo ja
Ga ryot ji man wen man han no chul boda ya han yo ja
Gu ron gam gak jo gin yo ja

Na nun sa na ye
Jom ja na bo wi ji man nol ten no nun sa na ye
Te ga dwe myon wan jon mi cho bo ri nun sa na ye
Gun yuk bo da sa sa ngi ul tung bul tu ngan sa na ye
Gu ron sa na ye

A rum de wo sa rang su ro wo
Gu re no hey gu re ba ro no hey
A reum de wo sa rang su ro wo
Gu re no hey gu re ba ro no hey
Ji gum bu to gal de ka ji ga bol ka

Oppan Gangnam Style
Gangnam Style
Op op op op oppan Gangnam Style
Gangnam Style
Op op op op oppan Gangnam Style

Eh~ Sexy lady
Op op op op oppan Gangnam Style
Eh~ Sexy lady
Op op op op
Eh eh eh eh eh eh

Twi nun nom gu wi ye na nun nom
Baby baby na nun mol jom a nun nom
Twi nun nom gu wi ye na nun nom
Baby baby na nun mol jom a nun nom
You know what I'm saying

Oppan Gangnam Style
Eh eh eh eh eh eh

Eh~ Sexy lady
Op op op op oppan Gangnam Style
Eh~ Sexy lady
Op op op op
Eh eh eh eh eh eh

That was exceptional! So you found it , didnt take you long

yeah...i'm learning the song now.

Are you learning the dance with your daughter?

(i need to find a translation)

LOL... u might prefer the following video suezy (lots of hot bods lol).

I like the edit.

very different ! lol

I saw a robot video (maybe two) with that song.

Orchids are a miracle in America,

Living like patients in a hospital.

Orchids thrive in small gardens in Manila,

Cloistered behind stone walls, fragant,

Supple petals longing to be touched.