kaynight...be nice or i'll report you.
Short Story...
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Cool story bro.
So no one? I really need someone to help me check this...
k thanks dude...
Enprise, I used to offer such services back in the day, so what the hey, I'd be happy to help. I'll give my overview, point out grammatical mistakes, make suggestions on what you can either add to or retract, etc.
Thanks
Clever. Sorry you hate me. Actually, no I'm not - Because I could give two farts to the wind what some internet tough guy thinks of me. You'd speak to me in a completely different way if you knew me in person, maybe even with a tiny bit of respect and mutual goodwill, but you don't. Instead you hide behind a keyboard and try to make what you believe are smart and funny quips at other people, because it feeds an ego that, without the anonymity of a keyboard, would not have a chance to exist and swell with each and every insult you tap out.
The internet troll is an interesting species, and I take pity on you. But as long as every now and then you can say something that can at least earn a chuckle, keep going strong! If it makes you feel complete in your alter-ego, good for you!
lol....
Now that Nomadic Knight's done doing his Donald Trump impression (only kidding, don't yell at me), let's see this story. What genre is it?
Chess genre
Don't let your alter-ego fool you. Like I said, sometimes you manage to get a chuckle out of me, but most of the time I just shake my head... But mad? Please. That's giving yourself too much credit.
After all the sniping and insults and returning to the original point, is it not reasonable to expect a person showing a Canadian flag, likely to be a native English speaker and aspiring to write short stories, to be able to spell "review"?
That's funny, but we shouldn't forget this is the internet after all. My eyes bleed when I visit Spanish sites.
RG1951 wrote:
After all the sniping and insults and returning to the original point, is it not reasonable to expect a person showing a Canadian flag, likely to be a native English speaker and aspiring to write short stories, to be able to spell "review"?
It's not reasonable to expect a kid to have perfect spelling. Did you when you were in school?
Lol...I just mistyped...I am a great poet though:
Kay night,
Mispelled the "Knight"
Voila
Nice one!
I could help if you like. Sorry your getting such knock back on your "reveiw" I sometimes misspell whiten I type fast too. Nothing wrong with it. Kaynight, up I have seen you post before, u seem like a decent guy. Why are up such a jerk today? No offence to any
Can someone help me reveiw my short story....I wanna know if it's any good