submission to writing contest twoxmi

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Sometimes, on cool January nights, something happens in the kitchen that no one has ever seen. However, when Max shuffles into the kitchen on one of those cool January nights to get a glass of water, he sees the chick sitting on the windowsill. He stares at it for a moment, then slowly walks towards it. "Don't you want to sit next to me, Max?" the chick asks softly and with a squeaky voice. Silently, Max stands next to the little penguin. He asks in a whisper, "Who are you?" The chick doesn't answer. The two still look out the At some point it turns around and jumps down to the floor. Max is watching him. Then the chick opens the refrigerator door, climbs inside and is gone. Where it goes, no one knows. Max goes up the stairs and into his room. There he goes to bed. He falls asleep immediately. The next morning, Max couldn't remember anything.

NOTE: the original text was written in a different language, the translation might not be the best.
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Yeah it’s weird, it’s a penguin chick and I only mentioned it’s a penguin once, the rest of the time it’s just ‘a chick’ :/
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Kinda confusing (in a good way!) o:

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It’s better in the original language :((
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twoxmi skrev:
It’s better in the original language :((

You did a good job with the translation tho!! c: be proud ma guy.

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twoxmi wrote:
It’s better in the original language :((

What is the original language?

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#6 German
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(A little late to say it, sorry
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#5 I just used ChatGPT I think