You Are Desperate

THis is just sad

You know, if it is so sad, then leave.

You don't have to share your opinion, you know.

Not everyone wants it, and you are being a troll.

Anyone with a GOOD opinion, meaning someone who is offering feedback, please comment.

Trolls offer feedback.

Is this a whole novvel or just an exert?

And is it a fictional novel?

It is a whole novel, I'm in the process of writing it.

It is fictional, but is based on real facts, historical fiction.

Like a news item.

no, a fox news item.

Guys! Quick! I need some editing advice, since my book is due tomorrow, and I am almost done. However, my teacher wants it edited before we hand it in, so we are getting time tomorrow to do that.

But JUST to insure my A+ :) I wanted to get it edited beforehand.

I'm sorry for the short notice, and you dont have to edit, but at least have a look at it. I put in a lot of work into this, and I don't want it to be wasted.

lol i can see you type in real time

i skimmed through this and it looks good, waiting for the ending...

Thx, i am working on it now and the ending should be done by the hour.

I was thinking of ending with an epilogue about Garry's second match in 1997.

Sounds good?

sounds like a good idea, but don't trust me, i'm not too great in english :(

its ok :)

I AM DONE!

GO ME!

Great.  The world just got another novel.

IKR, that is amazing!

P.S How is psy88's novel going?

Who is psy88?

The Gangnam Style? Heeey Sexsy Ladayyyyy! lol

Well, I understood approximately none of that.