So Perfect (beginning)

cookie97
cookie97
Feb 19, 2009, 2:13 PM |
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here's the first verse of my new song:

 

Every mornin i wake up

to see ur face

And when im not around u

my heart begins to race

Every thing about u

seems to be right

Thats why i am so happy that ur mine....

 

 

 

 

i need some feedback on this so i know if i shuld continue