Please Analyze this game (states R.1)

Mar 30, 2015, 1:02 PM |

This game is from the Scholastic State Championships Open division.

It is a connection to this forum:

but for specific anylisis of round one.

I will post one of these for all 7 rounds.

Here is the game:

Here is my thought process in the game. Please let me know the flaws if you see them, so I can improve. I was just trying to make 1 good more after another.