1st miniture with notes

Hello, this is my first miniture and I wanted to post it because it has a lot to do with opening development as most minitures do.

sweet, great push with pawns....

very nice,you make it look so easy, nut i know it takes alot of thought , good game.

 your welcome please post one of your instructional games that you may want to share with the midwest family.

Here's one of mine:

 ok the opening looks good maybe you can play 5...Bg4 first then 6....e6 but your set up is a French set up one tempo down (c7-c6-c5) but White was not active and can do nothing with this gain of time.   some caro players below 1800 fear Bg4 because of the early losts that can occur after White plays Qb3 but in this case the move is impossible. 10. ...bc is worth considering with the idea of playing on the open filies on the queenside but Black is already equal after 10. Bxc6. What was your plan after 11. Nxe4 de4 12. Ng5!? ? this might just win a pawn but White is already nervous. 16...f5?! this move weaken your kingsid pawns for a tactical trick. 17 g3! leaves Black in a bind to hold the e6 pawn 17. Qh3 18. Nxe6. However you show why the instant 17. Nxe6 is wrong and Nice finish.

thanks bill