So I was wondering... is this good?

I know this is really random, but I recently found a poem I wrote like a year ago and was wondering whether or not people thought it was good, this is it:

What if I would tell you

There is something in the air

Would you believe me

Or would you say I’m scared?

What if I would tell you

I feel there’s something wrong

Would you believe me

Or would you say I’m dumb?

What if I would tell you

There is a place, somewhere else

Where we can be free

And be ourselves

What if I would tell you

Such a place exists

Would you believe me

Or is your mindset fixed?

its good

It's amazing!!!! I could NEVER write like that

Thank you very much!

its really nice, but it can be improved like u can add some more metaphors and similes : )

Nice, love it

Its rlly good!

Yeah i really didn't put much effort into it i believe. I remember hearing about similes in my english class, i'll have a look!

if not you can serch it up thats the beuty of google lol

It is good

Its good yeah

Its nice and excellent at the same time