I highly suggest you don't make a thread like this...I have experience.
As in you have experience and would do it better, or its a bad idea to do it I had a forum like this, but well.....i spent a lot of time analysing *someones* games, and they ended up getting closed for abuse xD (you know who im talking about)
Hi! I've noticed recently that there are a lot of people in the forums (mostly U1500) asking for people to analyze their games. If you would like your game analyzed, and for me to give you some advice, please post in the comments below. NOTE -- I won't always be available, but will try to respond within 24 hours of your post