Nice win, but you should have brought your bishop out onto f5 on move 4 rather than g4 where it could be easily booted, which it was. If your opponent followed up to threaten your bishop you would be down on development and cramped from all of the pawns. Once you have your bishop on f5 the only way to try to kick it would be for white to play h3 which could easily be countered with h5. Good job!
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Mar 19, 2009
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Very interesting game you 2 played! My only advice for both of you is to try and not make so many pawn moves. I know you did so to strengthen ur position or game but instead it left a lot of holes which will happen when ur pawns advance. Other then that nice game keep up your efforts and i hope u both improve! 
Mar 19, 2009
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Good win. Try to focus more on developing pieces rather than pawns, though. Also, as Ian_Sinclair put it, pushing pawns creates holes.
Yes, it's me again.
This game was played earlier than my last game...
I haven't analysed this with computer, but still you can see my mistakes..