Please if you are going to comment on a game comment on these, these are the ones I don't understand:
https://www.chess.com/analysis/game/live/59176153805?tab=review
I suggest you study for openings a bit. You don't have to remember everything but following some beginner principals improve your start quite a bit:
- Take center
- Develop pieces
- castle
And you should be pretty solid. I can point you somethings in that first game:
8. Bb5, you have full centre control and you can punish your opponent lack of centre control by advancing pawns. Instead you move bishop again. It did not achieve anything and you lost time because you already had move the bishop once.
d5 and where is that knight able to go?
10.Bd3 after moving the bishop here you have some trouble after Bg4 which was played in the game
12.Dxf3 how did you miss that your queen is protecting the pawn and bishop?
In middlegame you get pretty far by checking these thing BEFORE(!!!) you make a move
- What is your worst piece and can you improve it
- What are your opponents threats/what will you do after opponent makes a move
- Checks/captures in the position and are those any good
- Opponents checks and captures and are those any good
- If you see a good move, pause for a second and look if there is a better one
I didn't see that 'the game goes on', as it looked like I was 2-3 moves away from being mated, with an extremely vulnerable King. I take your points on board, though, it's hard to evaluate a position without the help of the engine.