Please Analyze My Game

[Site "Chess.com iPhone"] [Date "10/27/2015 07:33PM"] [White "TheBassPlayer250 (0)"] [Black "Computer (Level 2) (0)"] 1.e4 e6 2.Nc3 d5 3.exd5 g6 4.dxe6 Be7 5.exf7+ Kxf7 6.Ne4 Bf5 7.Nd6+ Qxd6 8.d4 Nf6 9.c4 Ng4 10.c5 b6 11.cxd6 a6 12.dxe7 Bc2 13.Qxc2 c6 14.Qe2 Rf8 15.Bh6 Rh8 16.f3 Nxh6 17.f4 Nd7 18.f5 Nc5 19.fxg6+ Kg7 20.O-O-O Ra7 21.e8Q Nf7 22.Q8e3 Rha8 23.Qh3 Ng5 24.Qh4 Nh3 25.gxh3 Rf7 26.Qeh5 Rf3 27.Qxh7+ Kf8 28.Be2 Rb3 29.axb3 Nxb3+ 30.Kc2 Re8 31.Kxb3 Re3+ 32.Kc2 Re5 33.dxe5 b5 34.Rd8# Can you please watch my game and see what I need to do better?

We cant analyze this game, not in a way that will help you much anyway.  Your not at that point yet.  You need more games under your belt, preferably with a human across the physical board from you, that is much stronger then your computer opponent here, and that can give you pointers as you go.  Practicing tactics specifically would also help, and would be especially important if you dont have access to a suitable human opponent.  I recommend making a free account at chesstempo.com to do tactics problems.  Chesstempo is not really set up that well to make raw beginners feel welcome in that it starts people at a problem rating that will be too high for you.  It would eventually adjust to giving you problems that are right for you, but you would fail your first 10+ problems and get very frustrated.  My advice is to deliberately and instantly fail 10 or more problems, driving your problem solving rating down to a more appropriate level, where you'll have a chance, and not get super frustrated.  Once you get the rating down to your level, its a great learning tool.  

Good luck and have fun.  

After playing through this a second time it looks to me like this is one of your very first games and that you're literally still learning how the pieces move. I agree with ArtNJ that you need to get a lot more practical experience, period, even if just playing many more games on your computer at Level 3 and beyond until you reach the point where the piece movements become second nature to you, whereupon you can start to think about more complicated tactics like knight forks, and can start to think about higher-level issues like plans and openings.

What is the computer doing? I think you should do tactics puzzles and play the computer at at least level 4. Also I think you should watch a few videos from thechesswebsite.com. I also think you should just play more blitz games at 10 minutes.

Well, my comment is that, "what?? What is happening???" Both sides seems to have some knowlegde on how the pieces work, but are doing things like they do not think others would take their pieces. You definity need more games and XP. Good luck!