Torbay Cup Game

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Freddie_Confident

This game was in my districts cup (1st round)...I was representing my school where as we were playing St.Marychurch (all adults excluding 1)!

I got quite badly beaten in 15 moves but I would just like people to have a look at it and try and give me some advice on how I could improve or where I went wrong etc...  

Freddie_Confident

right ok could I possibly play d5 instead of exf4...

I know d6 is the main move but is d5 ok?!