Help for improve chess

Hi i wanted o say that can someone 2000 elo or near can help me improve chess i will be very grateful if someone can dedicate time for me and i wanted to know how i played against 12 year old magnus carlsen.

I asking for help becouse i wanted to be a CM.

[Event "?"]

[Site "?"]

[Date "2023.10.28"]

[Round "?"]

[White "Tu"]

[Black "Magnus Carlsen (12 anni)"]

[Result "*"]

1. e4 c5 2. Nf3 Nc6 3. d4 cxd4 4. Nxd4 Nf6 5. Nxc6 bxc6 6. Nc3 e5 7. Bg5 h6 8.

Bh4 Bb4 9. Bd3 O-O 10. O-O Rb8 11. a3 Bxc3 12. bxc3 d5 13. exd5 cxd5 14. c4 e4

15. Be2 dxc4 16. Qxd8 Rxd8 17. Bxc4 Rb2 18. Bxf6 gxf6 19. Rfd1 Rxd1+ 20. Rxd1

Rxc2 21. Bb3 Rb2 22. Ba4 Kg7 23. g3 Bg4 24. Re1 f5 25. Ra1 Kf6 26. Be8 Ke7 27.

Bc6 Bf3 28. h4 Rc2 29. Bb5 Rc3 30. a4 Rc2 31. Ba6 Kd6 32. a5 f6 33. Bb7 f4 34.

gxf4 Ke6 35. Ba6 Kf5 36. Bf1 Kxf4 37. Bg2 Bxg2 38. Kxg2 Kg4 39. Re1 f5 40. Re3

h5 41. Rg3+ Kxh4 42. Rh3+ Kg5 43. Rg3+ Kf6 44. Rg8 e3 45. Kf3 exf2 46. Kg2 h4

47. Rh8 Kg5 48. Rg8+ Kf4 49. Rh8 Ra2 50. Rxh4+ Ke3 51. Rh3+ Ke2 52. Rf3 Ke1

53. Kg3 f1=Q 54. Rxf1+ Kxf1 *

Thanks for reading the messenge,

Regards 

Also, here are the two videos I referenced in my diagrams, but of course feel free to check out my newer videos. I've also gotten a webcam since those videos from months ago