Togotian Fiction

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eryxc

Coming up on this thread is a story I am making called the Togotian Fiction!

Character rosters:

Ryan detectives(Ninja)

 

Tomato is devil’s advocate

 

Auk is Lone Ranger

 

Jen is secretary of Ryan

 

Togepi is Death

eryxc

Chapter One: Introduction

 

Ryan was a detective in a sleuthing detective agency. His code name was ninja, for his quick decisive skills. He was after the Puppet Master, but had no leads. The Puppet Master was a treacherous villain with no boundaries that controlled puppets... Ryan thought that puppets were creepy but he needed to solve this case.

 

Suddenly, the door to Ryan’s office opened and in came Jen, his sidekick, with a stack of papers. Ryan said, “Why the papers, Jen? I am trying to catch a murderer here!” Jen replied, “Sir you need food and rest! You have been up for two days straight. You have been working hard on this case and you need to stop. I brought some papers for myself to look over while you are sleeping.” Ryan replied in a tired tone, “I probably need to go sleep, it has been a long while, but nothing’s happened Jen! I have been searching for 3 years! When do you think I will ever find anything! *sighs* I don’t think I can cope with this much longer.” *Room falls silent for a few seconds* Jen broke the silence with a sigh and said, “Sir you need to go sleep.” Ryan meekly went over to the couch and, very quickly, fell asleep. 

 

Jen went to her stack or papers to look at and found a comment on a newspaper of a small town named Tomatoland. Apparently it was run by a tomato and Jen knew from earlier research that he was in league with some other villains. She decided to leave it in Ryan’s desk for him to check out in the morning. Jen walked home down the block and went to sleep.

 

Ryan was sleeping when in his dream he heard a large thumping noise. He woke up at 2:58 in the morning and tried going back to sleep but it didn’t work. Ryan then finally, since he couldn’t go to sleep, went over to his desk and looked at the piece of paper there. He read it and went, “Hmmm.. I can check that out in the morning.” Ryan went back to sleep with a lead on something for once.

 

Ryan woke up and felt himself on the floor, twisted in his blanket. He untangled himself and went to his desk to call the tomato he read about. He got on the phone and started to dial the number when a voice ran through his office, saying, “Don’t dial that number. It will bring pain, turmoil, and torture upon yourself.” Ryan heard the voice and stopped. He said, “Hello?” Ryan’s voice was empty and alone in his office. He started failing the number again when Jen came in and saw the paper, Ryan, and the phone. Jen quickly said, “Continue and when you are done, I can come back.” Ryan said Thanks and started typing the number again. He finally got the phone number and it rang and rang and rang... finally after about a minute, someone answers. They say, “I’m coming for you” Ryan slams the phone down very audibly.

 

Jen comes back and asks, “Is everything alright Ryan?” Ryan said, “No, everything isn’t alright. It’s worse than we thought!”

eryxc
LetsGoPokemon wrote:

Idk I why I just followed

Lol

eryxc
Sai2008 wrote:

WHAT IS THIS????????????????????

A fiction of The Official Goofing Off Thread, on forums now!

hitthepin

Hey, I remember this! You should be an author, @eryxc . You’re pretty good at this.

Want me to write Chapter 2, or is it your story?

silvertruck
hitthepin wrote:

Hey, I remember this! You should be an author, @eryxc . You’re pretty good at this.

Want me to write Chapter 2, or is it your story?

do it

eryxc
hitthepin wrote:

Hey, I remember this! You should be an author, @eryxc . You’re pretty good at this.

Want me to write Chapter 2, or is it your story?

I already have 2 and 3 but have to correct and make 4, so I got it I think

silvertruck
silvertruck wrote:
hitthepin wrote:

Hey, I remember this! You should be an author, @eryxc . You’re pretty good at this.

Want me to write Chapter 2, or is it your story?

do it

or I will

eryxc
LetsGoPokemon wrote:

TOGOT is in the off topic

Oops, one sec

silvertruck

I got a 4 on the STAAR test

hitthepin
eryxc wrote:
hitthepin wrote:

Hey, I remember this! You should be an author, @eryxc . You’re pretty good at this.

Want me to write Chapter 2, or is it your story?

I already have 2 and 3 but have to correct and make 4, so I got it I think

Wow. OK then

eryxc

htp you want the story background and whatnot?

thegreatauk

I might have to make a story myself since I first mentioned this but I think it would probably be a disasterhappy.png

eryxc
rychessmaster1 wrote:
My code name is 6000 pound man not “ninja”

So you want to be in the story of not? It’s my story.

hitthepin
eryxc wrote:

htp you want the story background and whatnot?

Nah. I’ll just watch. And write my own story.

eryxc
rychessmaster1 wrote:
Yes I would like to be in the story

Ok

eryxc
rychessmaster1 wrote:
Other than that 10/10

Thx

hitthepin
thegreatauk wrote:

I might have to make a story myself since I first mentioned this but I think it would probably be a disaster

Eh. I would read it anyway

silvertruck

My code name is spammer

eryxc
hitthepin wrote:
eryxc wrote:

htp you want the story background and whatnot?

Nah. I’ll just watch. And write my own story.

You sure about that?