Good problem!
As anselan indicated, it would be a good idea to add the threat line somewhere, for instance after a neutral defense like ..Rb6.
Note that this is still a lot different from the way I proposed in the other twomover topic. Not to say that there is only one right way to do it, but I find the current (standard) format a bit confusing. Of course, none of this is your shortcoming; it's all due to chess.com's poor puzzle interface. Not easy to turn it into something pleasant!
White in two by Touw Hian Bwee 1974