ANY poetry lovers out there ?

here's a piece for you guys... Everytime i see ur face my heart aches And everytime i see you bleed a piece of my heart breaks Everytime i hear your name i see your broken core Everything i look at reminds me of you Everywhere i see your face like the world is reminding me how your so scattered I care about you so much but those feelings never reciprocate All i do is stay strong for you to help you feel okay Here i am in front of you, breaking down yet you still can't make out my life is falling apart Here i am in front of your eyes drenched in tears you dont do anything about it yet you say you care And yes its true the worst love is when you love someone so much but they never love you as much

in my humble opinion, it’s not bad, but it’s not great either. Too classical.

wait nevermind sorry

i need to read it again

Yeah i found it

work a bit on the « musicality » - how it’ll sound

Do or do not there is no try

#7 🔥