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Every day you post a poem, I feel like each one is better than the last. I especially liked this one, as it added a very deep meaning to war and peace. Well done, and I hope to see more poems, like usual.
Don’t feel any pressure to make more, but I love reading them. You have a real talent for this, potato.
Perhaps I was in a bad mood, or maybe I just didn’t appreciate your poetry enough at the time. Either way, I love your work, seriously.
Thnx, I’m really enjoying making these and I’m really thinking about taking a high school class on it
Just keep doing it as long as you enjoy writing them. I’m happy to see you excelling at something you’re passionate, and I hope you take a poetry class in high school,
I can remember one of the thing I said in our convo about my poems, I said
“I may not be Poe
But I’ll put on a show
Just so you know”
“I may not be Poe
But I’ll put on a show
Just so you know”
You did deliver, girlie.
Don’t thank me, thank yourself for writing amazing poetry.
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To kill thou brother
Ending thy’s sister
Rage wars and battle
Is to give killers power
And turn good men
we entertain this death rattle
For what, resources?
Or just to cattle for slaughter
For peace is within reach
But we are blind as a leach
Blinded by our own hands and greeds
And it is our wants not our needs we feed
By our hand we choose
And with our heart we loose
We do our minds deeds
As some minds are weeds
While others are meads
With my question simple
My answer is a hard sample
For it is more than our leaders whim
But also our nature
The predatory instincts that are dim
We can blame the three
Anger blinds what we see
Power brings weakness
And the evil within the dark
May we overcome this mark
In our ever fighting times
As ghosts of the past remind us
Of the history we choose to relive
it is only us that can change these times
So here I stay and rhyme
Waiting for peace to rebirth
In its monumental hearth.