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ChipTheBoi

So I decided to venture into the world of haiku. This is my first one.

Creation of God
The leaves sigh and the birds chirp
Calm fills my being

Okay I know the mods are gonna lock this for saying “God” but before they do, can you please give me feedback? Thanks :]

DarthPhy

Nice

SriyoTheGreat

nice (not me who forgot what a haiku is)

ChipTheBoi

Thanks :]

TheRealTorchLit
Very good. I look forward to hearing more about your trek into this topic