First Chess.com RP!!!
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"What is it Loki, we haven't eaten properly in a month and now you are wasting bread?" But on seeing his drawn pistol Val mirrored the actions of Loki and drew his gun too. He had long since learned to trust Loki's instincts on this sort of matter and it payed to be careful. He had seen too much destruction in his time to be reckless and he had definatly payed the price.
Oct 2, 2007
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My character's name is Goo and he is a Protozoa Embryo. He's a one celled animal with asexual abilities. He can reproduce himself whenever he feels like it. All of his reproductions are linked to his commands and thoughts. He can spiritually transfer from one to the other in cases where self preservation is needed. Upon death, he automatically transfers to one of the other living cells.
Oct 2, 2007
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Goo had sent one of his reproductions forth to the city to clear the area before advancing. Through the repro's eyes he could see Val and Loki in the distance with concerned stances and their weapons drawn. Goo sent forth several more repros to search all exterior sides of the city for any possible danger. As Goo huddled between two ferns and a large piece of old forest driftwood, he could hear strange buzzing noises resembling the humming of high voltage power lines off in the distance. Although things appeared normal, there was an eerie absence of forest wildlife. Goo scanned his own area and realized that the paths leading into and out of town were overgrown and had not been maintained or used for some time. "With a city that size", Goo thought to himself, "these paths should be worn to the dirt".
Loki wasn't sure what was wrong with the bread. Then it hit him. That bread was artificial, a solid hologram. It explained why the bread tasted like bread, but didn't fill him up like bread would. "I don't have time to explain now, but this isn't the city we meant to go to. This whole place is a solid hologram."
"That technology has been banned for centries; the punishment for using it is death." Val's voice seemed to hint at calmness even when the context did not, there was something vaguly hypnotic about it. "But surely this is the city where you lost your eye Loki? Is that just a hologram too? We have to get out of here now."
Oct 2, 2007
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Goo ordered one of his repros to maintain surveillance on Loki and Val. He was sure by now that there was something very disturbing at this city.
"No I lost my eye in Sri-lanka, a village not to far from here. I think the two cities destuctions are connected maybe, but..." A scary idea entered his train of thought. " "Val", he hesitated knowing this would seem odd, "What was the name of the school where we met, and what was the English teacher's maiden name?"
Hesistation also played it's part on Valentine. Why did Loki suspect that he was not who he said he was? True Val had not shared some of what had happened to him as a child and his banishment from the Pyrelian civilisation had never been brought up, but it had always been a sort of unwritten agreement between the two.
"I met you when I was 14 at the Empire School of Secondary Education and the second question is a trick question because we had Mr Hangreen for English, so he cannot have had a maiden name. Why do you mistrust me Loki?"
Oct 2, 2007
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#29
OH man guys..this is hilarious stuff. I'm laughing pretty hard. Unfortunately I don't have time to continue my character at the moment. :) Can anyone chime in and be my character or does it have to be me?
I'm fine with someone taking your place. I must say, this has been so much fun to write! I feel like we need somebody to actually meet Loki and Val rather than stand back and laugh at them trying to eat holobread.
My caracter's name is Fader. I can make virtual image of myself and can blend in with almost any enviroment. Knowing who took Lokis' eye and the secret power it holds, Fader's searching desperately for the answer to the riddel.
His father told him the story when he was still a child, but he remembered it asif it was only yesterday. "If one could find the answer to the riddel of life, he/she would be granted infinit knowlegde and would therefor be the most important person on the planet. Be able to do anything and succeed"
If he can only find the person responsible for steeling Lokis' eye before anyone else, he would be able to solve the riddel.
Oct 2, 2007
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#32
Goo decides to approach Loki and Val with one of the repros. Even though he sending a repro, he can still feel their pain when they fight or get injured so he proceeds towards them with caution.
my character is darth rabidus... he is an evil sith lord who has lightning fast reflexes and can deflect every type of projectile straight back his hold of the force is very strong...
darth rabidus upon learning that loki and valentine where in a city nearby he decided it was time to finish the job... it was time to destroy the hopes of the world and bring death and destruction to the world...
but before he left he had to watch a replay of the 2007 toyota grand final... celebrating hard when his team geelong won! the he lit his lightsaber and proceeded the hunt for loki and his pesky friend...
Um... sith lord...
... lol
hey! dont pick on the sith!! they evil deadly guys!!
anyway
darth rabidus sprinting through the woods with the aid of the force to make him go incredibly fast.
he sensed a presence leaning against a tree... he slowed down and lit his lightsaber and stepped out in front of the man... he was wearing a funny gadget on his wrist, darth rabidus wanted it, greed overuning him he slashes the man's head off watching the head roll down the side of the hill made him feel warm and tingly inside... he took the gadget and inspected it "its a hologram maker!! i have killed hollow!! that annoying runt has been getting in my way for too long! at least i dont have to worry about him anymore..."
darth rabidus seems to be on an unstopable war path... only 2 people can stop him... loki and valentine...
there i continues the story for your character.. hes dead!
sorry.. it just makes it easier...
As Fader stroles down the road, he see something, someone lying on the ground. Cautiously he walks closer. Could it be?! Is it possible?! Its a hallow that has been decapitated! Fader is shivering. According to legands, if a hollow is killed, his body vanishes from the planet. (Dissapears) Could it be that the hollow senced danger and made a hollogram of himself?? If that was true, then the real hollow should be close!! Scarryyyy! "Maybe I shloud stay here a while and see if the hollow turns up again. He could have vital information and maybe know where I can find the evil person who holds the eye." As Fader sits down on a rock, he realised that this was only the beginning of the quest.
Firstly, you can't be a sith in a general RP. Especially one that seems to be unkillable.
Secondly, you can't just go around killing off another person's character just like that.
Thirdly, at Gideon - the characters name is Hollow. It looks from your post that you've been watching too much Bleach (though, can't say I blame you! Hmm, that reminds me, I'd better go download the latest fansub episodes...)
darth rabidus sensing anothers approach decides to leave... he has no time to fool with infidels... in the distance he sees the smouldering ruble of a huge city... "that could be the city" he thinks to himself... holstering his lightsaber he runs at normal pace with his sense alert so as to not miss anything... searching... searching for what he wants... he wants the eye.... knowing who has it he must kill the two people that will do anything to protect them... loki and val...
(do you like my story line? if not i can change it... please continue the story... im learning to right creativly so any tips would be awesome)