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V Slashers (Story) ———————————————————————————————— 1,440 years ago, there was a small village in the country of Myenaur, this village is called Mezama. Mezama is a poor village, they're also a weak village. One day, Myenaur declared a war with another country. People from Mezama got so scared that they quickly went underground. They formed a new civilization down there, named “Mezamaro”. The enemy country found out about Mezamaro, they threatened to kill everybody down there but Mezamaro made a deal with them. The deal is that they won't kill anyone and Mezamaro would join them. They agreed, so their people didn't get harmed. But one person didn't agree with the deal, it's a citizen of Mezamaro named Altha. The other country helped Mezamaro build their civilization, they were upgraded. But one day, Altha heard a conversation between 2 soldiers of the opposing country, they planned to kill everyone. They wanted to kill everybody so that all of their resources come to them. Altha ran away, yelling what she heard. Suddenly, a soldier came and killed her. But before her body fell to the ground, she made contact with a white leaf. Altha woke up in an unknown place. She was in a place where it looks like a forest but there's a huge tree with white leaves in the middle of it. As it turns out, she was chosen to be the next Goddness of Prophecies since the last goddness' time ended. She met the old godness, they talked for a while until the old goddness left. A few years passed, she continued to write prophecies for everyone. She was stuck there, the place she called Hemelse Plek. A hundred years later, a war begun between Myenaur and Nuera. Altha did not wrote that at all, as it turns out, their universe crashed with another. God's from Altha's universe wants peace with the other goddness but the other gods thought that they're trying to conquer their universe so they declared a war. Neither Altha or the other God of Prophecies can control the war, some gods lost while others survive. The war resulted the creation of powerful stones called Crystars. After 3 years, they finally declared peace. Altha was concerned, there are some things/events that she can't control. So, she wrote/made a prophecy about the Chosen One, the savior of them all. She knows that their universe could collide with one another after some time, so she made that prophecy to solve the next wars, the chosen one should be born after a thousand year. After some time, Kenery was born. Kenery was born on a small town in Suabia. Crystars from the Great Gods War wer discovered in a cave, Kenery's parents dedicated lives to research about the mysterious stones, when they died, Kenery continued their legacy. After some time, Kenery made the V Slaz, a device that's blade is made out of crystars, it can turn into a sword. As Kenery discovers more and more facts about the stones, he discovered the hidden powers it contains. He also discovered that it have different types. After years of researching, Kenery made Zarkins, a device that you put into a V Slaz and then morph into whatever types of crystar you put. The government discovered Kenery, they want him to cooperate with them to conquer other countries but Kenery refuses. They tried to use force, but Kenery uses his Zarkin and V Slaz, transforming into a Crystal Creature. He fought them and win easil. One day, he wrote everything about the stones and then, he hide the books on a secret room in his house. Suddenly, his V Slaz got taken away. His house was raided by the government, he was captured and was brought to the king. They tried to make him say everything about the stones, no matter what they do, Kenery refuses to talk. They king tried to use the Zarkin to transform, but it failed. In his frustration, he stabbed Kenery with his own V Slaz, Kenery died. They burned down his house before leaving it there. Kenery's friends visited his house a few days later, they found the books and keep them. They learned about the stones and te proper way to use V Slazes, they also discovered millions of millions of Zarkins nd V Slazes in Kenery's secret room. They used them for good and passed the books, Zarkins, and V Slazes to the next generation. The cycled continued for years, some used them for bad and sorme for good. They call those who has the ability to use V Slazes Royal Power.
Urban_Person

Also, please tell me if there's a plot hole, that'll be helpful. Thanks!

im_ghostburger
Nah, need more description and context. No “suddenly”, that shows sloppiness.
Urban_Person

Hmm.. The world is supposed to be unpredictable but ye, I get your POV

Urban_Person