I need some feedback -Define

I have been trying to improve my poetry lately, and I just wrote this draft. I want you guys to give me literally any feedback, whether you are a writer or just a reader. Thanks! Here's the draft:

A Friend Long Gone.

A walk around the park

Once full of playful screams and laugher

Now empty, like a ghost town.

A walk past the old house

Where you spent most of you time

On every day your parents would allow it. 

You long for the times where

The nostalgia wasn't nostalgia

Where instead, it was the present

And you couldn't wait to play.

Instead, you stand here

Doing nothing about it

You make no move to get it back

All you do is stand here

Waiting, for a friend long gone.

Thanks!

I’m not really into poetry, but I like it! You can try to do some rhymes

these are my favourite type of poems, you did a really good job with this

Thank you! I'll do a rhyming scheme for my next poem.

Thanks, Tag!

no rhyme 0/10 (jk)

it's really good actually, showing some emotion and also making it relatable.

but it's always satisfying to read a rhyme, may just be me tho

It’s a pretty solid piece. Keep up the great work.

I really like it, define :D

It’s quite nice, its very unique, too, not that it’s a bad thing.