I’m a start working on haikus

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Any advice?
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Sorry, that doesn’t change my mind
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Always count syllables
Otherwise you may mess up
And then people will see
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(That was intended btw)
Avatar of Concerned-potato
Okay
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Do five, seven, five.
All the lines don’t have to rhyme.
Good luck, potato.
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Is there any rhythmic action?
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#9 okay
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I’ve never thought about rythmic action. I just make it.
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#9
But if they do rhyme
Your haiku is just sublime
Worth the extra time