Im writing a story

rate this out of 10, im not done: 

Chapter 1

In the sky, there lived a nation of wealth, ideas, and magic. The nation lived on a floating island in the middle of the sky. And there sat the nation of Skyland. Skyland was made of three islands. Royal Island, Living Island, and Enjoyment Island. Skyland was a perfect utopia, with no flaws. In Skylands, everyone is educated, or was educated, but we'll keep that for later. All Skylanders are educated in the Royal Castle of the Sky, the top and only school in Skylands. Skylanders are geniuses. With these geniuses, Skylanders have found out how to inject transportation genes into Skylanders. So, the most popular transportation in Skyland is teleportation; teleportation is quick and with no flaws. Teleportation is natural, and everyone is born with it. Another popular way of transportation is flying. Flying is not natural,l and Skylanders have to learn it in classes. Magic is also abundant. Skylanders use magic every day for everyday chores and enjoyment. And as you can see, all life was perfect until one day, when Wizard was in his magical room when he was told a prophecy, and the prophecy told:  

For all of Skyland, an attack will come

The evil will attack, and blood will rain

All men will go down in fury and pain

No man can save

Besides the chosen one

Thunder itself will save the Sky

The 5 travelers must travel to

40.7484° N, 73.9857° W

To restore peace to the Sky

The wizard told the Wise Ruler of Skyland this message. So then the ruler of Skyland spent the whole day trying to decode the prophecy. And this is what he got: Evil is the Wicked Dragons. And Blood will be death. But Thunder itself will save the Sky, stumped the Ruler because Thunder was controlled by the Wicked Dragons, and so did the fact that the Wicked Dragons were attacking, Skyland had destroyed the Wicked Dragons many years ago. 

Chapter 2

With that, the Ruler held a meeting in the Royal Castle of the Sky. “For all of Skyland who are capable of performing magic, join us for a meeting,” he shouted. At once, 1,ooo,ooo,ooo,ooo men, women, soldiers, robots, and wizards arrived in the castle. And as you can imagine, the Ruler's palace was magical, it would expand as needed. and was covered in marble, gold, diamonds, and emeralds. 

“We have been told a prophecy,” he continued. “That the Wicked Dragons will attack!” murmurs passed through the crowd. 

“But I thought we locked the Wicked Dragons up in the Blackhole of Lights end!” shouted a child. “Yes, Cedric, we did,” answered the Ruler. “But prophecies from the Sky never lie, so the Wicked Dragons must have escaped somehow.” “Back to the topic, we need 5 Skylanders, capable of the most advanced magic to come to my throne tomorrow.” 

I like it, but…

skylanders?

I think that’s a copyright infringement lol

can you rate it?

Thanks