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Greg went to the store. While there, he bought a gallon of milk. […]

[…] Now, look at what it’s like when you show the action:

Greg pulled open the door and stepped through. A slightly musty smell assaulted his nostrils as he walked into the old corner store and faced the high, cramped shelves. The scuffed floor creaked under his weight as he walked over to the ancient cooler. […] Greg opened the cooler and picked up a pint of milk, careful to check the expiration date. Satisfied that it was relatively fresh, he took it up to the front counter.

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Damn you sound like a smart person

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RealTactics960 wrote:

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Perfect! Really good example.

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What site should I use for drawing the map of the place?

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RealTactics960 wrote:

Damn you sound like a smart person

It really was nothing :]

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Muffin_Soul wrote:
RealTactics960 wrote:

Damn you sound like a smart person

It really was nothing :]

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RealTactics960 wrote:
Muffin_Soul wrote:
RealTactics960 wrote:

Damn you sound like a smart person

It really was nothing :]

No, what I just did was really nothing

(I accept cash as reward for funny)

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Muffin_Soul wrote:
FreeFriendlyDove wrote:

rate "sunshine in the rain" by shania yan

93/100.

Cute and beautiful lyrics.

Masterful singing.

…but the instruments… absolute perfection.

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS why the 7 mark lost tho??

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RealTactics960 wrote:
RealTactics960 wrote:
Muffin_Soul wrote:
RealTactics960 wrote:

Damn you sound like a smart person

It really was nothing :]

No, what I just did was really nothing

(I accept cash as reward for funny)

Let me break into a bank real quick—

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FreeFriendlyDove wrote:
Muffin_Soul wrote:
FreeFriendlyDove wrote:

rate "sunshine in the rain" by shania yan

93/100.

Cute and beautiful lyrics.

Masterful singing.

…but the instruments… absolute perfection.

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS why the 7 mark lost tho??

Though the lyrics were good, I think they could’ve been improved a bit. Still great, though.

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Muffin_Soul wrote:
FreeFriendlyDove wrote:
Muffin_Soul wrote:
FreeFriendlyDove wrote:

rate "sunshine in the rain" by shania yan

93/100.

Cute and beautiful lyrics.

Masterful singing.

…but the instruments… absolute perfection.

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS why the 7 mark lost tho??

Though the lyrics were good, I think they could’ve been improved a bit. Still great, though.

acceptable. rate "cosmos" by her too

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and rate "hurricane" by anson seabra

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BlueHairedBoy13 wrote:
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big pockets, deep pockets (whoa)

been balling, keep off it (whoa)

been bout it, keep talking (whoa)

all I ever wanted’s what I got, alright?

big pockets, deep pockets (whoa)

been balling, keep off it (whoa)

been bout it, keep talking (whoa)

all I ever wanted’s what I got, alright?

 

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BlueHairedBoy13 wrote:
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Can I pay with my debt

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RealTactics960 wrote:

What site should I use for drawing the map of the place?

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BlueHairedBoy13 wrote:

rate my dming

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BlueHairedBoy13 wrote:

rate my dming

92/100.

You have great ideas! I do think you need to work on descriptions, though.

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Muffin_Soul wrote:
BlueHairedBoy13 wrote:

rate my dming

92/100.

You have great ideas! I do think you need to work on descriptions, though.

true true

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FreeFriendlyDove wrote:
Muffin_Soul wrote:
FreeFriendlyDove wrote:
Muffin_Soul wrote:
FreeFriendlyDove wrote:

rate "sunshine in the rain" by shania yan

93/100.

Cute and beautiful lyrics.

Masterful singing.

…but the instruments… absolute perfection.

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS why the 7 mark lost tho??

Though the lyrics were good, I think they could’ve been improved a bit. Still great, though.

acceptable. rate "cosmos" by her too

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