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Jacobshinn
Aug 19, 2020
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https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13639228/1/Lucario-s-Final-Challenge

What do you guys think?

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Jacobshinn
Aug 19, 2020
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#2

I just want you guys to be real honest, both in a constructive way, and kind of in a really harsh way, because, I know, it's FanFiction.net, and there's gonna be a lot of bad FanFictions out there, so I just want you guys to point out specifically what I was doing wrong, and how can I improve.

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FunnyLaptop
Aug 19, 2020
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#3

Cool!

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Jacobshinn
Aug 19, 2020
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#4
FunnyLaptop wrote:

Cool!


Thanks! Hope you enjoy it!

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FunnyLaptop
Aug 19, 2020
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#5

okay!

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Jacobshinn
Aug 19, 2020
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#6
FunnyLaptop wrote:

okay!


Oh, and don't forget to check out my bio of my villain character, Toshineko Hirozaki:https://www.chess.com/forum/view/off-topic/toshineko-hirozaki-my-villain-oc

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Jacobshinn
Aug 19, 2020
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#7
stopvacuuming wrote:

great job jacob but have you considered a melee one

Glad you liked the fanfiction! And no, I have considered it yet.