Need help making music for lyrics I made

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RealTactics960

the lyrics are as follows. if anyone helps me and I ever wind up posting it I'll credit them

Every day the demons scream

I try to stop them, but it seems

I cannot kill them, though i try

It makes me start to want to cry


My backs against the wall

A demon screeching out a call

It tells me that i failed my Lord

And i can’t kill it with my sword

My sword of works that i have done

Can’t even cut a single one

These demons heal when lands are blown

It makes me think i'm in Ta-Lo

I grab my sword of NF’s songs

Engraved “we all sometimes do wrongs

just know that you are not alone”

honestly, i feel like THATS A JOKE

The demon knocks me to the ground

And laughs as at me it looks down

It starts to chant its song once more

And say the things i cant ignore


“Time spent on you is wasted time

Your life is just a waste of time

And all you touch is in pieces

You do not even know what peace is

You know its not cause you’re a pisces

Its cause you fail, you’ll never grow

You’ll never be loved or be known

Your life has less point than a ball

Why shouldn’t you just end it all?

You’ll never flee from your mistakes

And you know you will never change

Dont try to fight, dont try to scream

You cant escape this, not a dream

You can whine and cry and plead

But no one will come in your need

So run away, if you want to

But i will always run with you

I’ll never leave you, never stop

Until the day your body drops

And then when you go down to hell

(Cause let’s be real, you know too well

That you are destined for the pit

You cant escape, you cant stop it) 

Ill be right there, still by your side

Repeating all your hurt inside

Cause you are mine forever now

And I will never leave your house”


And by now im sobbing on the floor

I just can’t take this anymore

But then as i look to my right

I see a light shine in the night

My dad hands me a shining sword

He says im who it is made for

My other Father made this steel

To vanquish demons, make me feel

Like i am more than what they say

And make them finally go away

I doubt that it can really aid

These demons heal from every blade

But i know its my only chance

So i swing it as i advance

The demon screeches as i do

The cuts i make it cant undo

And so i finally slay this beast

With the sword made for the least


Every day, this sword glows bright

Dispelling all the dark and night

I killed my demons, now i know

I always have a source of hope

raffa8

Cool!

RealTactics960

also what do you guys think of the actual lyrics? btw this is meant to be a rap song

RealTactics960

Kind of in the style of NF

Got-Dead

I have an idea for how to make these lyrics better, just play no music and read it out in a monotone and uninterested tone with multiple voice cracks

RealTactics960

ehhhhh.... ill think about it

raffa8

I wouldn't even add too loud or extraordinary music. The lyrics should be the main focus point imo.

RealTactics960

Yeah, but i dont even know what notes to sing. need help on that front

SprigatitoIsCute2014
few secs
RealTactics960

alr. ill check back later and see if anyone has any suggestions

Got-Dead
SprigatitoIsCute2014 wrote:
few secs

"few secs"- Sprigatito, one hour ago

mai

nice

RealTactics960
Witch_King_Of_Angmar3 wrote:
SprigatitoIsCute2014 wrote:
few secs

"few secs"- Sprigatito, one hour ago

""few secs"- Sprigatito, one hour ago"- Witch_king_Of_Angmar3, 23 min ago

KazakhMusketeer

""few secs"- Sprigatoto, one hour ago"- Witch_king_Of_Angmar3, 23 min ago" - RealTactics960, 1 min ago

Got-Dead
KazakhMusketeer wrote:

""few secs"- Sprigatoto, one hour ago"- Witch_king_Of_Angmar3, 23 min ago" - RealTactics960, 1 min ago

""few secs"- Sprigatoto, one hour ago"- Witch_king_Of_Angmar3, 23 min ago" - "RealTactics960, 1 min ago" - KazakhMusketeer, 2 min ago