New, improved togotian fiction

Chapter One: Introduction

Ryan was a detective in a sleuthing detective agency. His code name was ninja, for his quick decisive skills. He was after the Puppet Master, but had no leads. The Puppet Master was a treacherous villain with no boundaries that controlled puppets... Ryan thought that puppets were creepy but he needed to solve this case.

Suddenly, the door to Ryan’s office opened and in came Jen, his sidekick, with a stack of papers. Ryan said, “Why the papers, Jen? I am trying to catch a murderer here!” Jen replied, “Sir you need food and rest! You have been up for two days straight. You have been working hard on this case and you need to stop. I brought some papers for myself to look over while you are sleeping.” Ryan replied in a tired tone, “I probably need to go sleep, it has been a long while, but nothing’s happened Jen! I have been searching for 3 years! When do you think I will ever find anything! *sighs* I don’t think I can cope with this much longer.” *Room falls silent for a few seconds* Jen broke the silence with a sigh and said, “Sir you need to go sleep.” Ryan meekly went over to the couch and, very quickly, fell asleep.

Jen went to her stack or papers to look at and found a comment on a newspaper of a small town named Tomatoland. Apparently it was run by a tomato and Jen knew from earlier research that he was in league with some other villains. She decided to leave it in Ryan’s desk for him to check out in the morning. Jen walked home down the block and went to sleep.

Ryan was sleeping when in his dream he heard a large thumping noise. He woke up at 2:58 in the morning and tried going back to sleep but it didn’t work. Ryan then finally, since he couldn’t go to sleep, went over to his desk and looked at the piece of paper there. He read it and went, “Hmmm.. I can check that out in the morning.” Ryan went back to sleep with a lead on something for once.

Ryan woke up and felt himself on the floor, twisted in his blanket. He untangled himself and went to his desk to call the tomato he read about. He got on the phone and started to dial the number when a voice ran through his office, saying, “Don’t dial that number. It will bring pain, turmoil, and torture upon yourself.” Ryan heard the voice and stopped. He said, “Hello?” Ryan’s voice was empty and alone in his office. He started failing the number again when Jen came in and saw the paper, Ryan, and the phone. Jen quickly said, “Continue and when you are done, I can come back.” Ryan said Thanks and started typing the number again. He finally got the phone number and it rang and rang and rang... finally after about a minute, someone answers. They say, “I’m coming for you” Ryan slams the phone down very audibly.

Jen comes back and asks, “Is everything alright Ryan?” Ryan said, “No, everything isn’t alright. It’s worse than we thought!”

Well this is interesting. You have a very good writing style!

Nice suspenseful ending!

Just curious, will I ever make an appearance in this story?

Oh are you a togotian then?

Yeah, I'm pretty active on TOGOT

You do have a way of writing very good!

I used to be. Then snowy showed me CHT. So I left that. Joined the bulldog community, and left that for the NSPBCL, but left that so I can write for CHT and for my job. 

I see. I've heard of bulldog chess, but I have no idea how it works

I was actually better at it than I was at regular chess thanks to a nifty piece called the witch. If you like breaking some classic rules in a balanced and intriguing way..,,......check it out. 

Ok, I might do that sometime

They even have a rating system and leaderboard setup. I was #4 once. Soooo close to #3. All I had to do was win one game 

Wow, that's pretty cool. The only time I ever got 4th in something was for a history competition XD

I would lose that one. 😂🤷‍♂️

There has to be a big glitch or something. I dont follow you and dont follow this post. Yet I get these notifications. Same with others. Odd

Interesting. Well, eryxc is a pretty cool person, just saying

I dont doubt it. Just weird tho cause it's happened to me before

Yeah, idk what could be happening

Weird...

Here we go again!